Oh man what a chapter...I can't believe how behind I've become with my reviews...lol...this was a great chapter. Poor Jon he's not going to react well to what Jo's going to tell him.
I can't wait for your next chapter! Please Update!
-TetraLink17-
(P.S. I've updated Perfect Love II its kind of short but please review.)

Je m'absente pendant je ne sais combien de temps et 1 seul chapitre sorts. Mais allant moi aussi à l'école et ayant d'autres priorités, je comprends que ce soit long. bon courage.

Well, let's see... nothing injected... no alcohol, and no bad food, not even a smoke, even though I don't smoke. Mybe I'm just crazy to come up with the eggplant man, but that is very possible. Anyway, very good chapter. That Matt is EVIL! And Jeffery's torured past was well thought of. Good jub. Will update soon. Ciao!
-Esetban T Rodriguez

Copyright to the Update soon sentence?! Can you prove it?

And No Light Jeffrey? Aw that's a shame... but I know how much you like his and YOUR dark side. So you have said it 92 times that your reviewers are important to you, or are you actually suggesting that I have that many fingers and toes...

And Update... umm... SOOMEtime

Good chapter. Really! Good about the flashback. Hope Jeffery DIES A HORRID DEATH AT THE HANDS OF THE EGGPLANT MAN! Or Jo or Jon would work fine. (The eggplant man's something I came up with. Don't be alarmed.) Jon actually killed them? Gee! Don't forget to read my update. (Oh wait, you did. Well, read the next one, coming soon.) Ciao!

-Esteban T. Rodriguez

Yes...

So you had Jo find the ring... thought you'd do that...

I think you've said it *counts fingers* *Counts toes* too many times how important we are to you

So now we get the flashback treatment... and you know now I can nag you when you don't...

UPDATE SOON!

oo! interesting! dude, that sux! poor joanna! i hope jonny comes back soon!

Grr... *kicks Matt's *** Bastard... hmm, though I suppose he's now Jo's only hope... and I hope he gets there before Jon does anything he'll regret when he comes to... though you should add something like that to make it extra angsty.. the more angst the better!! Great work and tonight I'll update!

WEll, a good chapter as always, but (No offense. The story's great and all.) try and wrap it up sometime soon. Its starting to repeat itself, Jon "kills" people, Jo leaves him momentarily, etc. Finish it before you're doomed to keep it going for all eternity! AH HAHAHAHAHAHAHA (inhale) AHAHAHA..(cough, cough, hack, wheese.) Ciao.
-Esteban T. Rodriguez

Soulless... c'est un mot que j'aime enormement. Chais pas pourquoi. Je savais que le prob de Jon avait un lien avec le gun de Jeff! C'etait assez facil a deviner... en passant, je voudrais me faire une fic sur Soul Calibur mais je sais pas vraiment comment ca marche (j'ai peine a comprendre le read me de ce site. c'est pas complique mais pas assez explicite...) j'aimerais que tu m'aides un tit peu. merci d'avance!

Well... Joanna should never have let Jonathan go... but hey it makes plot and story...

*gasp* joanna? cheating? O_O what the thundermuffins is going on here!! poor jonny! i wonder who's manipulating him..poor guy...why did jo cheat? there must b more here than meets the eye! ...at least...i hope there is ;_;

Et tout d'un coup on sait comment John passe de l'imbécile qui se fait mal au psycho sadique démoniaque qui a un bras droit déformé, un casque avec des ailes de chauves souris, une armure bleue nuit (pas d'allusion à une certaine émission pas catholique) et qui porte un grosse épée cyclope. C'est comme ça que Silly Johny a tué tout le monde sur SkedarLand!

Uh-oh. Jon's in trouble again. Will things be ok between him and Joanna? I hope so! Update soon please.

Well, i'm flattered that you chose Australia as a locale. I really am. And in a short note, I hated Die Another Day. It was too much like Diamonds Are Forever. But, enough of that. Good chapter, as always. Just lay off the BEWARE e-mails! That scared me, but I've been in California! Sorry!