A good fic. Kinda sad in a way but I still like it.

I'm really glad that you wrote a fic on Spica. Sadly, you're right in saying that she is the most ignored character in MLR. I've always felt that she should be the one who ends up being with Loki, unfortunately the author does not share the same viewpoint as I do. Thus, I was really disappointed with the ending of the manga. Making matters worse, I found little to none fanfics on Spica and Loki's relationship. Thankfully, I found your story. That cheered me up a little. So, thank you.

You got the spellings quite right actually. It's only in the beginning you spelt Loki-sama Loko-sama. That made me laught though... Hahaha... The story feels so real... You're really good..

Though I never read MaloRag that I know a little from friends, but I know Spica...I can't believe how you express her feeling...it's so pretty...and..sad..I feel pity for her all of sudden. You write this one very nice!

The thing about this story was that it was more of a summary of events told in a 1st person POV rather than a thoughtful introspective by the character. Although that clearly was your purpose, I expected more thoughts on Spica, and perhaps an even longer story. But I enjoyed your Little Mermaid reference and nothing seems to be particular horrid about your writing or style. Like it, good work, write more. XD.

Loved it! Spica´s one from my favorite characters and you made a fic just for her, yay! It clarify somethings about the manga for me... *can´t read japanese* Go Spica