 Jewel Magix 7/22/11 . chapter 1Great, I think I'm blushing because of this... Faving... -jewel |
 takara410 5/25/11 . chapter 1I love it please more |
 LeBookworm 5/16/09 . chapter 1I giggled so much.
Twas hilarious.
Thank you for unleashing this upon the fanfiction world... |
 anonymous 3/29/07 . chapter 1 Great story. Poor Shendu. Poor Finn! Tso Lan kissing him. Love that and the Shendu torturing. Hillarious |
 Lost In A Dark Wood 1/17/07 . chapter 1This is absolutely hysterical. I have to wonder though, what are they all going to think when they wake up the next morning?
Poor Capt. Black. He really must be very desperate and very drunk to hit on Uncle and make out with Valmont, not that Valmont isn't the sexiest guy on the show, just that you know, Valmont's kinda evil. And after all, Valmont's just using him to gross out Shendu.
Some of the pairings are a bit out of the blue, but I don't think it was your intention to write a serious romance between the characters, so all is good. I also loved the brilliant self-aware comments, like the one about Internet groups.
Only caught one mistake, you say "there weren't too much people," but you should say "there weren't too many people." |
 SyntheticEuph0ria 11/27/06 . chapter 1Oh. My. GOD! starts laughing hysterically That was HILARIOUS BEYOND ALL REASON! Especially with Valmont at the end. XD
And what you did with Viper and Jackie walking in? Priceless. |
 AcidFire101 1/10/06 . chapter 1I am to stund for wordsbut this is great |
 CultOfStrawberry 9/20/05 . chapter 1This story rocks so much theres no words for it |
 Psychotic Otaku 9/16/05 . chapter 1Lolz Awesome stuff. |
 DraconWolf88 8/18/05 . chapter 1 OMFG! XD! XD! This is one of my favorite stories evah! V*_*V |
 irkenOO8 4/12/04 . chapter 1 what about biatsa. poor bai sa i pitty you. |
 scottishwolf 4/10/04 . chapter 1 Haven't laughed this hard in days! Funny! |
 Yu Mutou 4/5/04 . chapter 1Very cute story! I really liked it! _ I love when Uncle and Tohru are betting on how long it would take for Jade to run away. Great idea! |
 Rebecca Hb 4/1/04 . chapter 1*cackles gleefully*
Now that was fun. Lotsa crazy situational humor, and fun Shendu torturing.
Possibly the best line, because it is just so in-character: "Wah! Jade! How many times have I told you not to play with demon boys? It is not good for your future!" he shouted and ran after the two.
*laughs* |
 LTC 3/27/04 . chapter 1Lmao. This is one of the funniest things I've ever read. Okay, so my slashaphobic friends whom I'm copying and pasting it too aren't too happy, but I loved it. Poor desperate Black. Hee hee hee..."Uncle has no time for kinky man sex! Uncle must find Jade!" That line is priceless. So...did Jackie end up joining Viper and Tchang Zu? O.o
It seems almost unfinished in a way. Perhaps you should right a sequel. It was funny, sarcastic, and disturbingly hilarious. |