i like it

Jeez, Chrono cross maniac. CHECK OUT THE DICTIONARY YOURSELF FIRST BEFORE YOU ASK OTHER PEOPLE TO LOOK UP A WORD.
This is from the dictionary on this site:
Blameworthy \Blame"wor`thy\, a.
Deserving blame; culpable; reprehensible. --
Blame"wor`thi*ness, n.

Hope that helps.

1) Plot: Looks fairly interesting.
2) Spelling, grammar and punctuation: "Blameworthiness"? Is that an actual word, or did you make it up? I must also question the use of a question mark in the sentence:
"Is it not funny how much clearly I could see in the dark?"
Other than that, occasionnal mistakes, but not too bad.
3) Yep. You do need a more interesting summary.
Overall, not a bad start. Keep it up.

ooh! pretty interestign start! i can imagine raynor fullfilling his vow to kill kerrigan now!

Very good!
Update

Hey, nice job with this story. Warcraft?! Who plays Warcraft! Just Kidding. Go write more SC fics.