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Metal_Gear_Yaoi
2007-07-10 . chapter 1
OMG I LOVE THIS!! It's so sad it had me bawling the first time i read it. I printed it out and i showed some friends at school who had never played the game and it had them crying too. Beautifully written and i love how you did two perspectives of the situation. "I never really hated him." My fav line...*sobs uncontrolably*
You suck
2007-01-30 . chapter 1
WTF!??!?!?!?!?! sNAKE AND Liquid? They bros, sick, stupid,fuck!

How could you do that to such a good plot like MGS? I wish I could kill you! die!
ScarrFace
2006-06-23 . chapter 2
That was such a good story it made me depressed...POOR LIQUID!
rabidbunny
2006-05-06 . chapter 2
never has there been a fanfiction that makes me cry eveytime i read it, the last two lines broke my heart i cant wait to read your other works
Jazzmine
2006-04-05 . chapter 2
This was beautiful. I had to stop a couple times to wipe away tears forming in my eyes, but I just burst out crying when I read the last two lines. That's a sign of wonderful fanfiction.
Psychotic Otaku
2005-12-10 . chapter 2
Awesome story
Akai Kah'ghe
2005-11-18 . chapter 2
This is... so good... but so sad... I think it's the first fanfiction to actually make me cry.
Demented Koneko
2005-10-24 . chapter 2
The way you wrote both characters was incredibly beautiful. This story really touched me. ;_;
Gene Wolf
2005-01-24 . chapter 2
I love this story!^_^ Especially Liquids version.
Lithanika
2004-11-14 . chapter 2
Oh damnit, you manage to succeed in making me cry. *sniff* It's too angsty for me :P
CiyFox
2004-10-12 . chapter 2
Aww liquid!
I'm naerly crying!
This was great, i really feel sad for him.

He did sound a bit like Agent Smith from the matrix by the way he was repeating him self, but aside from that, it was brilliant!

Poor Liqud Snake... ~_~

Keep up the good work!
CiyFox
2004-10-12 . chapter 1
This was so touching. I love it, keep up the good work!! ^_-
Imagos
2004-08-08 . chapter 2
Now this fic I like... angst, lubberly angst! XD There are some lines in here that are just awesome; you're a talented writer!
Kuroneko7
2004-06-16 . chapter 2
I love this story so much, it's beautiful.
Captain Phoenix
2004-05-28 . chapter 2
My eyes are wet.
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