 Shukakku the adorable raccoon 2009-06-21 . chapter 10yep except i woke up in the middle of yelling at my cd player ^.^; i sleep with music on and i guess it skipped or something ^.^; |
 andhearts 2009-03-02 . chapter 15LOVE! :D I lvoe the almost canon of this. :D I have an obsesion wiht those type of stories. where there's little spices of canon sprinkled about. :DD lol. :D
This is lovely. Though I was really wanting a glimpse of Roxas *is obsessed* haha. :D This is really good. I hearts it. It made me laugh so many times.
"Um…you okay?" He asked, finally.
"No! I got hit in the face my a pinecone! Flying about five THOUSAND miles an hour!"
"You're okay."
That was one of the greatest things ever. I reread it like 10 times and copied it becasue I knew that I would have to put it in the review. :D And see, I did! :D
Keep up the awesome work! :D |
 Anayuki 2009-01-07 . chapter 13lol! ths cracked me up!
"Some roast beef, ome chicken, a pizza" I noticed it right away that it came from spongebob when i read that part. and the bonds,
Cloud and Leon:
"..."
"..."
so funny. keep it up |
 Anayuki 2009-01-07 . chapter 15it'llbe great if you make a sequel for this. I know ur under alot of pressure, but damn u make very good stories! I read the other one u made home and ur good. it could be a book. an rated r book that is. well keep on writing. and by the way, good idea u had for this story. I never thought that u do whatever u want with ur characters, but now I know. |
 Innocent KH 2009-01-06 . chapter 13i love Scrubs! XD but where's the referecne to it? Thanks anyways ^.^
Am off to finish this, but i just wanna tell u the bonding part of Cloud and Leon had me laughing like a maniac XD Hehehe.
And u write everything so simply, its just beautiful. ^.^
And now, am off to read! yay! ^.^ hehehe |
 Naruta13 2009-01-01 . chapter 13"Nothing much was going on with anyone else. Sora and Riku were continuing to "bond".
Cloud and Leon were doing some bonding of their own. It went like this:
"…"
"…"
omg that part made me crack up SO hard xDD |
 yours4alleternity 2008-08-12 . chapter 15AW! i love it! so adorable! it needs a sequel tho |
 Polish 2008-05-27 . chapter 12Ok if this had happened in the game, or was a game in itself, I would so buy it! I mean Im on the edge of my seat, Man! this is good! keep it up! -shall be checking out more of your stories- |
 Polish 2008-05-27 . chapter 11Ok ok...-takes deep breaths to calm down- Ok its ok, just calm down... -not working still holding heart trying to calm down. its soo not working!-
This is deep! man alive! this chapter had me on the edge of my seat! |
 Polish 2008-05-26 . chapter 6I think I know wht Sora has, its a mental disoder where the person has to have someone near them, they cant stand to be alone, thats it isnt it? I like this, its very well done! ^^, |
 Heart Br0ken 2008-03-31 . chapter 13SPONGEBOB! |
 Captara 2008-02-27 . chapter 15Aww I loved this so much^^ Great Job at it okay^^
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 Captara 2008-02-27 . chapter 14Woot! Go them Go them!
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 Captara 2008-02-27 . chapter 13Haha the Cloud Leon thing was perfect. "..." I laughed my ass off.
.:Yuki-san:. |
 Captara 2008-02-27 . chapter 12Thank good Riku didn't leave^^
.:Yuki-san:. |