It starts out pretty good, but yes it does start to get corny at the end, and yet still enjoyable at the same time. I love how you set up Luna with the prince, Honestly I hate MayaxPrince it's too non-realistic and don't EVEN get me started on Yuta x Luna That's even worse. The prince came in late he should have married Luna who also came in late. Besides, he doesn't really know Maya all that well anyway considering she's completely different from her younger self. Cute fic.

Whe!

How cute!

LunaxPrince??

Interesting...


anyways, LOVE the YutaxMaya-ness!

hi hi ! im neera from malaysia..so, honestly, your story is the best ! i also a maya & yuta fan..they are really cute togather right?! your fic is exactly just like i wish the ending of ultra maniac will be..i am very happy because someone share the same mind like me ! so, keep in touch !!.
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p/s= do you have friendster ?

mahusay ka! hndi mo sakin cncbi n sobrang nalulunod k na sa reviews ng stories mo... ano ung pnka-marmi? 659 b un? grabe... lkas mo tol!! eheheh!! astig!!

i think ur story is kind of cute go go yuta/maya

That amusement park sounded like Enchanted Kingdom...The ending was great well except Luna...Don't take it the wrong way but I agree with the "WHAT?!?!"

the rides you mentioned remid me of Enchanted Kingdom!! hehe... nyweiz, nyc story! cool ending... i lyk it!!

cool story, i luv it!

ASTIG kwen2 mo pre! Hehehe...

hehehehehe! baligtarin daw ba! pro mas bagay! good job!

Subarashii... nice story! Hoping i'll find more of your stories soon... Keep it up!

i like the story... very nice ending...just don't let my friend find out, she likes yuta and nina... never mind that! just keep up the good work!

Wow, this is interesting. I like the alternate ending bit. You've done good work here, kid- keep it up!