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| Lunatic Pandora1 2008-06-11 ch 79, | abuseThey should really talk with Rian about that lightning. It just can't be good when a Jedi fries people with lightning like a Sith. |
| M1nks 2007-12-05 ch 79, | abuseGood story, shame it's died. |
| acepro Evolution 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abusebrilliant, brilliant... BRILLIANT! |
| VincentValentine25 2007-11-22 ch 79, | abusethis is the best KOTOR story I've read i hope your still writing it one thing i can't figure out is the pairing (if there is is one)in chapter 33 bastila and Rian kissed, but i think there's subtle hints to Rian and Carth i hope that you go with Bastila/Rian (if you are pairing anyone together)because it will seem like you're completely going against the way you were writing, please don't pair her with Carth please ,If you could clarify this somehow(i don't care how or if you do it) i'd be thankfull i also hope you're going to tatooine next because we need to see HK-47 Rian needs to walk the line but she shouldn't go full dark side Good story if only the game had been this entertaining it was good but not as good as this Keep writing true believer |
| Sdarian 2007-09-04 ch 79, | abuseGood job. I hope the next stop is Tatooine. Keep up the good work! |
| Sdarian 2007-09-04 ch 62, | abuseThat's too bad. You should have stuck with going to Tatooine, so that you could get HK-47. Regardless of where else you went after (although, from their standpoint leaving after retrieving HK-47 and doing nothing else on the planet would be a rather big waste of their time), I feel the trip would have to be more enjoyable with him along. Anyway, good job on this so far. I was rather worried at first with how wimpy Rian was. I almost stopped reading it, but I looked at some later chapters and decided to give it another chance. Keep up the good work. |
| VikingJedi 2007-02-12 ch 79, | abuseI really enjoy this story. The way you switch perspective from character to character is fun to read. I hope you get a chance to update it. Seems like you've let it die off... |
| Freidon 2006-12-23 ch 77, | abuse The link leads to a video of a scene cut out of the female darkside ending. Thought you might be interested. |
| Freidon 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseWow, if I were in Rian's world, everything would be swirling around me. Though I've reviewed before, I'm here to say, "Rian wouldn't be the type to stay completely true to the light, but I believe in the end she should be light-sided. As in, keep her in the middle, doing good and bad things, but in the end let her be light-sided. Not only would we have that cute little romance with Carth to fawn over, but it's always nice to see a happy ending. Even more so with a smart-alec like Rian. ~wink~ |
| dorothykilljoy 2006-08-13 ch 78, | abuseHo'man. I've loved this story since I first found it. I really hope that Rian sticks with the light side. Because I'd like to see her and Carth be like... "i luv u lol" because that would be awesome. :D Keep up the good work! |
| Queenofinsanity 2006-08-08 ch 79, | abuseYAY! Updates! glorious updates! Thank the force! Alright, enough exclamation points. but yeah. Wonderful updates, and I'm looking forward to getting some more. |
| Mats Forsen 2006-08-03 ch 79, | abuseIt warms my heart to see a new chapter of this. I hope you continue writing more! :) |
| Feza's twin 2006-07-21 ch 79, | abuseOMG It's an update! Yeah, took me a while to notice. Sorry 'bout that. So just how is Carth gonna manage talking to some ** off Wookies about how his friend Jordo is really an ok guy, and let him fly away, even though he works for evil Inc.? Cause I don't think they'd be in the mood to listen, even if Big Z and Daddy give the ok. |
| JOSH 2006-07-19 ch 79, anon. | abuseVery good, very, very good. Can't wait to see the ending. |
| Freidon 2006-07-16 ch 79, | abuseYEESS! You finally updated! Liked the chapter, even more so about Jordo. Keep up the good work. |