OMG OMG OMG OMG FINSIH! WHAT HAPPENS! WHERE IS KENSHIN?? WHAT IS HE GONNA DO? WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN TO KAORU? TELL ME DARNE'T FINISH IT...please.
XOXO

I hope you'll find the inspiration to update this soon. It's been a while since you updated, but I hope that you still will update this. You kind of left it at a cliffhanger.

The way you wrote Chapter 5 was very good. I love how you used different scene-shots or points of views...or are they called by some other name?

It's a very sad story. Kenshin won't know that Kaoru is in critical condition in the hospital, Megumi must feel horrible, Sano must be so guilty that Kaoru had to rush because he got out of the building so late, and Misao must feel so terrible that she couldn't stop Kaoru from driving...

I hope that Kaoru will survive! Please let her live! In the summary, you said 'When Kenshin disappears, Kaoru changes.' Does she change physically, mentally, or both?

This is a brilliant story with a lot of potential. I look forward to seeing it updated.

Thank you.

Good luck.

^_^

up date soon please update. i can't wait to know what happens next . please sup date soon.

VERY VERY GOOD!! TOTALLY SUPER MEGA UBER GREAT!
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!NOW NOW NOW NOW!

Ja!

**starfairy14s**

jeez! i hate fics where kaoru's so damn pathetic! there are a few fics which depicted her as a strong woman. and that megumi! KILL THE **!

por kao, all this its megumis fault

When I read your chapters you always leave me in suspense which I really can't find that in other authors so i just wanted to let you know

OMG! poor kaoru! man, shes in deep. and kenshin doesnt even know! man, not going good for kaoru. anyway, love this chapter. really sad. i feel bad for kaoru. well cant wait for more to come. hehe

OMG OMG! please don't let her be crippled! please don't it will make me cry! update soon! lov ya...bye

OMG! poor kaoru! she was really close to getting to kenshin! man now hes leaving and shes dying, possibly. man love the story. hehe. cant wait for more. ^^

I wonder what happened to her 0.o! Please update sooN! Thank you bye bye!^^

wait! don't delete. firstly, sepia told me to apologize. She said u must have endured alot from me. I aint gonna be miss remorse and stuff, i came here to tell u the facts. And that's good luck nicky in the future...god bless and take care of you. Sorry, i dunno how u look at me after that scanty review i sent u. Ur choice.

Are you a Megumi hater?

i like! o.o

megumi is a **