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Lord Kyp
2009-11-23 . chapter 19
This is the second time I've read your trilogy along with the prequel. This is the second time I've felt completely mesmerized, which says something (maybe nothing meaningful to you but my praise for your writing talent) as I feel I've read it this time around with a more mature mind. You've written a great series.

At times, I felt that the dialogue was contrived and that the memorable quotes from each of the Star Wars movies that you tried to insert didn't necessarily click in the instances where you placed them, but on the whole, they didn't detract from the great experience.

I don't know if you have any plans for the future regarding this arc or any other, or whether you even plan on writing anymore but for what it's worth, I strongly encourage you to continue to hone this talent that you clearly possess.

It's been a pleasurable few days shunting aside my studies in a clear display of time mismanagement, and now that it's come to an end, I can't get enough of your writing. From your other one shots, you clearly keep up with the EU. That's nice to see, and I hope to see some more works, maybe even a novel-length fic sometime in the future!

- Kyp (Think you can guess where this one comes from? :P)
LJP
2008-03-18 . chapter 19
OMGOMGOMG that as to beyond awesome. all 3 stories. thank you so much. that was great writing .. done in the style of the books with action, emotion, and grit. Well done
lacthryn18
2007-02-18 . chapter 19
i know that you wrote this quite a while ago but i felt i needed to congratulate you on such an amazing story. i've never laughed and cried so much at the same time! you managed to create a truelly wonderful sage while sticking very closely to the original. i hope that you decide to write more int he future as i'm sure that you would be just as successful. well done, and may the force be with you.
floppy
2006-05-20 . chapter 18
I've mentioned before that I love your stories; however I was pretty upset when you killed off Anakin. How very sad. Oh by the way, I was just as sad when Obi-Wan died in your second story. Still in war I know that heros have to die.
floppy
2006-05-20 . chapter 17
I've me
lisilgirl
2005-12-06 . chapter 19
O! *falls out of chair* I don't know what to say...THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY WONDEFUL! I've been reading the other ones, and...well...um...I LOVE THEM! You need to keep writing...
Hieiko
2005-08-07 . chapter 19
Magnificent story. Thank you for writing it.
setpadwan
2004-11-14 . chapter 19
I must say that I'm a very selfish reader. I don't post... ever, well at least I didn't post until now. I've decided to stop reading fanfiction forever because I don't think I'll ever find one that I can read that will not disappoint me. This trilogy has been everything I've imagined and more... it's certainly the best writing I've seen. It would definately be a pity if this were not published, but I do realize the problems with the Lucas and Co. So, I think it's only rightful for me to post a reply, just to tell you how great it has been, staying up late at night, reading your writing. Your plot flows with such incredible ease and the characters are so alive that I wouldn't be surprised if Threepio turned and called you "the Maker"...Thankyou so much for your time spent in this story. I do believe you'd make a great writer in the future. Thanks and may the Force be with you.
Breath of Awen
2004-09-02 . chapter 19
BEST. ENDING. EVER! ^_^ I love it. A wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it to the utmost.

You're an amazing writer. Thanks for this fiction. ^^
Urazz
2004-08-31 . chapter 19
Great ending! Though it is a shame that there is no baby Ben in there yet anyways.
ScifiHero
2004-08-30 . chapter 19
Brilliant i loved all the parts of the serie just a shame it has ended.

but yay you are great
The Fink
2004-08-30 . chapter 19
I guessed where you were going just a fraction before you got there, but that's no criticism. This is a wonderful cap to a truly excellent saga.
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Many, many, many thank yous for writing this.
hermionepotter141
2004-08-25 . chapter 18
That is so sad I almost started crying!
awsome writing though!
Urazz
2004-08-25 . chapter 18
Great ending to a great story. Though it would've been nice see Luke and Mara tell the family that they are getting married. Would've been good and possibly funny especially if the family was taking bets on when Luke and Mara would get together openly.
Kristen
2004-08-24 . chapter 18
Beautiful story.This is bay far the best trilogy I have ever read.Even though Anakin is dead everything works out.Great story.:D
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