I've got to admit... it is SO Rally and May!

Well written, but for something classified as humor it's pretty boring.

Heh heh! Just one of those things! Like it!

Thanks for giving me something enjoyable to read after an hour of crap. ::Thumbs up.:: Write more.

Nice, well written. The characters were pretty well done, considering there were only 3 episodes and the manga to work with.

I loved it. These fanfics really are getting rare. So many people think they can write and end up lowering the value if Gunsmith Cats. That's something I hate and will always report to the author. Yours rocked, though.

Well, I suppose if anyone would be a gun-otaku, it would be her...

Clever concept for a quick laugh. Plus, you've written the dialogue such that absolutely anyone can get the joke without knowing a dang thing about GSC.

I liked this story. I could picture this scene taking place, and like someone stated earlier, good GSC fics are in short supply. Thanks for the great read!

Enjoyable little short piece. Good GSC stories of any variety are in short supply. When are you going to get back to Bar Tales?