I really like this story! Honestly! It's well written and cohesive. I hope the update is up soon.

Hey! I began to read your story. I want read more and I love how it's going so far. I would be VERY happy if you can update. I look forward to reading this great story:) don't leave the story hanging please. It's not to often I get to read a story like this.

luv it and cant wait 4 the next 1 2 come out!

i like this story. i'm so upset that you haven't update 2 years. well update soon!

is this finished?

cool fic

wenz the next chap gunna b up?

Oh. Dear. It seems you haven't updated in, um, forever?

We-ell... Update soon, please?

This story's pretty.

it was so awesome!

well i am about to creat

"the ori fan club"

this is the second story that i read, and you have something that makes every character real so angsty that makes me shiver

you are a great writter and also have such a great imagination

i am your fan

and i love your story

i will read your other storys too

this is really well done but are you ever going to finish it?

i'd like to see how it ends.

Hmm...I like it. But would Naruto really want to kill Sasuke? I mean, yeah, he'd be angry, but want to KILL him? Or does it have something to do with the war and stuff? Yeah, that'd make sense. Sorry if you already answered that in the chapters, I'm not a very careful reader. (sweatdrop) Anywayz, I hope you update soon.

'Loha!

You weren't kidding about that slow thing in your profile, were you? It's been two years since this story's last update. I would've presumed that you'd given up on fanfiction completely had it not been that your most recently updated story was last year. And now I know that the "next chapter will NEVER come". And to be honest, as a reader, I'm disappointed. It had a lot of potential, a lot of fans, and a lot of flair that comes rarely on this site. But as an author, I'm infuriated. You as an author have a duty to your fans. If you can not fulfill the duty of taking time off of whatever it is that is keeping you just to write a chapter every once in a while (no, not TWO YEARS), then you should not be an author. Do not take this the wrong way, I am not flaming you (on the contrary, was I not just praising your work?), but it shames me to see such an author with such talent giving up work that they've done such an excellent job on. You've disappointed one too many people. Who cares about the plot going on in real life? Who cares if the manga is causing Sasuke to gain different actions than that in your story? The whole reason for fanfiction is to come up with things yourselves, whether it be right on track or completely AU. Now you were either reminded, or know. So please, just do something about it. Peace, Mahalo, and Zai Jian.

-_-Waffles-_-

its been two years...

That was really good!I can't wait to read some more!

this story is awsome