I agree in your point of view for sakura, i admire her loyalty so much. Nice fic.

That was a really nice story you wrote :] Emotional:] :P

ok, i nearly cried in the end, i love how this fanfic was 7 years old and still we really don't know what will happen in the end of naruto manga, because kishi wants us (fans) to prolong the agony of sasusaku :( anyway great story i love the sakura POV, i really hope one day in the manga, they'll reveal how sakura really fallen in love with him, i mean cmon with the one in ino's flashback chapter right? i really think she didn't fell in love with him just for his looks, maybe theres something deeper than that.

First things first: I LOVED this story! :D I think with fanfiction, it's quite difficult to write a good story using first-person. But you pulled it off flawlessly :) I loved how you wrote Sakura in this story, as a girl trying to sort out her feelings and taking a deeper look into her emotions. And the pace and development was wonderfully done! I think your short sentences were really effective... my eyes didn't stray from the screen a single second because I was so engrossed in your story! You also kept Sasuke and Sakura in character, and added a little extra dimension to them that was your own author's touch. All in all, perfection :)

This is awesome, fireblazie. :) You developed the story perfectly! My favorite part is when she realizes she loves him. _ my second favorite part is when he comes in and starts sneezing. :} keep it up!

Timber Wolf

aw, this is so cute. I'm so glad everyone is in character as well. . You have great writing skills.

you got talent!it was so cute!great!...i dont know wat to say.

OMG that was SO awesome i LOVED this story your awesome lol

this was really spectacular! very sweet and just. i knew it was love (well, duh, you say) but its that simplicity of being with him. there is nothing more.

That is the best one-shot ever! The last line was perfect! : Sometimes, the unspoken words are theones that mean the most. It was beautiful, the way Sakura progressed into realization. You could get this printed in some magazine about Naruto, people would pay to read this-it's that good...wait...are you a professional authour? -_- Because even if you're not, I was wondering, could you write a story about...Gemma Doyle and Kartik from a Great and Terrible Beauty? Or just more Sakura and Sasuke please?

You are an awesome writer...ROCK ON!

or should I say, WRITE ON!:)

aww! Such a cute story! The way you wrote that matched their personalaties almost perfectly! I can definitely imagine that happening in the real anime

aww! i love the ending!

cute! my bestfriend read it and she said the same thing

Nice...and swet!

AMAZING story! Love the simple plot, Sakura's pov (how shes trying to work out her feelings) and the little things that Sasuke does that mean so much more.

Your truly a talented writer. You should prepare yourself though, you'll be getting plenty more reviews for such a gratifying piece of work.

sign,

10tealeaf