Love it!! Love how dawn took charge, can't wait for the rest of the story!!

way to go, im reading all your dawn stories so keep it up but for this one i am finding your chapters too short, way to go!

way to go, im reading all your dawn stories so keep it up but for this one i am finding your chapters too short, way to go!

i really liked this! it was very different, a totally different side to the spuffy story. you managed to capture dawn's character, ro at least an aspect of it, beautifully, and i liked that very much. you also showed soem compassion towards buffy, and that was good too. the tara dwan freindship seemed very natural, too. well done.

I just read your story.kewl keep it coming

O..nice. are you gonna make it to where dawn and spike get to gether to help him forget buffy-the-**-vampire-tramp?

Add more soon!

The dynamics here are a very realistic elaboration of the canonical dynamics, but taking it in a completely new direction. Good work.

very powerful, too. it shokes you, every word emans a lot, lots of jolts.