 dreamofdesire 2007-06-21 . chapter 12Yay! You're back! I'm so excited...I love this story...it just keeps getting better and better! Please update soon. |
 Gabzek 2007-06-14 . chapter 12OMG you updated! *Does dance in joy* And I must say I loved this chapter! Though it was slightly hard to remember the story after all this time...Still, love the idea of Jack Sparrow in the present, and with a giant cat...lol! And Billy is such a great name for it! lol! Can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon and not in like half a year! And are you ever going to finish my Brothers Keeper? Cause it's awesome! All of your stories are awesome! |
 AhiFlame 2007-06-13 . chapter 12Firstly, let me say again that knowing you're back to writing PotC FF has made my day, and just at the right time. You're amazing, mate.
Still, it was kind of fun to have control of the cat. Until it woke, he could do just about… well… anything to it. A mischievous grin spread across Sparrow’s face.
“How much d’you like spinnin’ in circles, Billy?”
“Sir? Are you all right?”
Rotfl. So Jacklike, I can see him thinking exactly that...reminds me of Ragetti and Pintel's cannonball stunt in AWE. And just like that, a perfectly interrupted devious plot. Love it.
Wherever, whenever they were, fashion sense for servants certainly hadn’t improved. -> *snerk*
You’re a bit old to be running with a gang, y’know.” -> *falls over* A gang!! hahaah, hilarious! Honestly, I think you're the only writer who could pull off putting Jack in the present.
My dog thinks I'm insane right now (indeed, he's making his way upstairs) because as I'm reading the backandforth between Jack and the nurse, I'm laughing my tail off. Probably shouldn't be trying to eat dinner at the same time, eh? ^^:
*twitch* I sure as hope you update again soon though...leaving it at that'd be a might pure evil. |
 ArmoredSoul 2006-10-27 . chapter 11Wait. Is he...? Was that...?
O.O
He's in our world, isn't he.
Ohh dear!
...
Well, atleast we know he's gettign proper medical attention, and will probably survive the wounds he sustained...
OH!! PLEASE! UPDATE SONN! |
 ArmoredSoul 2006-10-27 . chapter 10Jack...? C'mon, Jack. You're just fakin' eh? Right? :whisper:
Captain...? |
 ArmoredSoul 2006-10-27 . chapter 9JACK! Don't do that don'tdothatDON'TDOTHAT!
Stupid bloody stubborn mangy Pirate!!
Aw CRAP!!
I'm gonna have to go get 'im AGAIN! |
 ArmoredSoul 2006-10-27 . chapter 8O.O
Uh oh.
BAD kitty. BAD KITTY!
:Praying:
Please don't hurt Jack! |
 ArmoredSoul 2006-10-27 . chapter 7O.O
Oh no. Oh NO!
How the hell does Jack get into this crap?!!
(Besides the fact that crazy fan girls put him there, of course) |
 ArmoredSoul 2006-10-19 . chapter 4Good Ol' Captain Jack. I always knew he had a kind heart. d^-^b
Keep it comin', lass! |
 ArmoredSoul 2006-10-19 . chapter 2Cool!!
This sounds very interesting!
I'll finish this later, but I still think this story is quite interesting! |
 marlamulder 2006-09-20 . chapter 11Please update this story soon! It's a wonderful story and I can't wait to see where it goes from here! |
 kungfuchick 2006-09-01 . chapter 11 Where are you? You have to come back and update. This is such a great story! There aren't any good Jack/Ana fics out there...yours is just about the only one left. I really can't wait to see this fic in modern times! Please update soon. |
 redcirce 2006-09-01 . chapter 11 As always, your writing is amazing. (It's great to see you're still writing POTC!) Lovely intricate plotting and OCs, and well written Jack and Ana voices. You switch between point of views very well- its great to see different takes on the main characters depending on who's eyes we're looking through. I loved how you portrayed the closeknit relationships between Jack, Anamaria and Gibbs through small interactions. I especially liked the teaching scene between Ana and Diego, the surreal dream sequence, and (as someone who admittedly loves Jack/Ana) the small bit where "our" Jack muses on the effect alternate-reality-Jack had on alternate-reality-Anamaria and how he would treat his alternate self if he got the chance. Very touching though horribly sad.
It was a brilliant save to thrust Jack into modern times to deal with his life threatening injuries, but doing time travel (from a genre into "modern times") well is always difficult, so I'm very curious to see where this goes. |
 Gabzek 2006-08-11 . chapter 11DON'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT!
Come on, update this brilliant, engrosing and well writen fic!
Please?
You have got me hooked, I don't want to have to wait for the next chapter, so please update soon! |
 mbali 2006-07-25 . chapter 1wow, amazing, read this all at one go...i can't wait for the next chapter!! |