cant wait to read more .

keep writing

Ohh! I need to read the next chapter! Update soon please!

Steph
AKA
ButWhyIsAllTheRumAlwaysGone?

this is getting really interesting...how are they going to get out of it? loving this whole arc, it's amazing!
by the way, i'm really sorry about your grandmother...i've had way too many people i know have cancer to not say anything. *gives you an e-hug*

"What he said, about being asked to leave the navy… what's it mean?"

Brian was silent for several moments, almost long enough for Will to think he had lost consciousness again. "Keep him away from Jack, Will. It means you keep him away from your son, no matter what."



This is SEIROUSLY -BAD NEWS-.
Oh GAHD I hope Brian doesn't die, and Mini Jack doesn't die, an' Will don' die, and Captain Jack... Oh dear, that's a long list of people hoping not to die...

Will? A crazy man?
And who wants to meet them so bad that they'd go so far as kidnapping?
...
Personallym I can't think of anyone off the top of my head. All the enemies I know are dead. Or supposed to be dead...
(you've POTC2 right?)

Uhoh. BadbadbadbadbadbadbadBAD!
What happened?! WHAT HAPPENED?!!

hi estwlwolfe. i noticed that you haven't updated this story in a while. the thing is you have a great gift for writing, and it just shows on your stories. i have the others leading up to this one, and i hope that you will pick this one up again, because it has caught my attention, and has it in a firm (very firm) grip.

your back *hugs you tight* I love this. I want to keep reading but I need to get up for work in the morning but i'll be back to read the next chapter and some of your other pieces i've noticed i've missed. You are a simply wonderful writer!

GAHH! why havent you updated? did u die did u lose interest in the story? what? you have a really good thing goin here and probably have a good number of people waiting for you to update this story!update soon or at least let your avid readers know what is goin on!!

*sobs hysterically* you...havn't...finsihed...it! *sob sob*
Come on! Please, please finish, or at least update this story!
It sounds so good! I want to know what happens!
PLEASE! PLEASE! WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! Or at least tell us that it's over...

Y'know, after reading the first 3, I didn't even bother to check whether or not this one was finished...and I must admit that I'm disappointed it's not! This series, with all it's relationships and the links between Jack and Will and Jack and Ana Turner, has really captured my attention and I really enjoy it. I do hope that you plan on finishing this story in the near future, because I'm REALLY curious as to who's out for blood this time, and how Captain Jack Sparrow will once more save the day. I hope to see an update to this story soon!

Sincerely,
Tate

please update soon. im liking the story so far, but you left off in a bad place. please update soon :D please!!

Wow! This story is fantastic I know it hasn't been updated in a long time and therefore I'm guessing you may have abandoned it but ayway if you update it I'll be here ready and waiting to read it *hugs*

I've read all the other stories in this arc and I've absolutely loved them! You have a lot of talent. But I was so disappointed that this story isn't finished. I really hope you can find the time to update yet another original well written fic.

for the love of god, please update!