hehe bilbo attacking frodo with bra

i do like Elrond though, just growing frustrated with them all and kicking them out of Rivendell

eh...Still here... English paper still unwritten

but me loving the humor

I had a feeling that u were referring to Secret Window! hehe. And are you making fun of the knights who say "NI!"?? hehe, and I like their methods of transporting Frodo, the attention **.

hehe! Somehow I managed to finish one paper during this, so I feel no qualms in reading the next chapter because my reamining paper isn't due until tomorrow morning.

Besides, I am addicted now. I shall warn both of you that if you have only this remarkable masterpiece as your claim to fame I. WILL. HUNT. YOU. DOWN.

You CANNOT leave me without your crazy humor!

the stalker in the bushes,
lulu belle

*gasping, clutching sides* this is so bad! And I have two papers due! One tonight the other tomorrow... this is awful..

"Did it hurt when your boobs fell from heaven?"

and then and then the whole nazgul and the swords and the neighborhood goes kapluey! *makes extravagant hand gestures, and falls back out of chair*

see what I mean? This is awful...

*mouse moves over and clicks the little arrow*

*Seeing ch 5* oh, it would be a waste to not read this page after my fickle computer put so much effort in pull it up...

bulldog-themed boxers not doing anything- maybe the elven smiths should have made him a cup instead.

ROFL!

Aie, I love you mellon nins! *bows*

you need to put a warning label on this chapter

DON'T READ UNLESS A PERSON TRAINED IN THE MYSTICAL WAYS OF CPR IS PRESENT!

Nearly died reading about Frodo's mangled encounter with the cart! hehehe *gasp* hehehe

*spews popcorn everywhere*

BWAHAHAHAHA! You are now my new best friend... hehe... the One Bra... very FITTING. Some reason I am reminded of Sydney White when all the guys are gathered around staring at her bra "That thing has touched boobs!" and they are all in awe. hehe.

te amo much!

We will have your babies.
You have no idea how deep our love for this story goes.
(About 5mm)
Sh! It's pure randomness and excellency!!

I love youre story! only one prob, I'm dyslexic too!

lmfao, I love this...

"The elves, the most vain, effeminate, and, above all, conceited of the races, were given three corsets to hopefully choke the life out of the bastards" LMAO
I'm a huge Legolas-lover, and no I won't come after your blood for saying things like these about Elves. It's hilarious, I can't kill people who are hilarious!

Btw, I stumbled upon your penname by stumbling upon one of your stories that one of MY favorite authors had added to their fav stories, and yeah. Confusing? don't care, point thing is, I like you and your brother now ^_^
I think

Hi, I really like this story, especially the fact that there is a dyslexic character. I am writing a story with a dyslexic character, and I'm getting a lot of mean reviews from people who don't understand my cause. My sister is dyslexic, and so I want to help more people understand about dyslexia by writing about it. I am very glad you have decided to have a dyslexic character in your story, and I hope you read and review mine. Thank you once again. Spread the dyslexic love!

I give up, and plead sanity.

That was really a very useless chapter. I would give up on this story right now, if I was my normal self. But since I’m bored, I would just continue reading. Hopefully, the new chapters will have some sanity in them.

You’re storying just needs less hentai and more plot action. Sanity, description, sentence fluency, organization, rare word choice, character detail etc. For example, edit a chapter at least five times. Add some similes and metaphor: a couple of dictionary-word choice will make it better too.

May I add that if you lessen the perverseness of this: you will attract more readers? I get the feeling that this story (so far) was written in hast, in a hurry. Hopefully, even though chapter may look long, it will be so because it is filled up with similes, metaphors, sanity, sentence fluency, organization, rare word choice, character and setting details, action and less sorry humor.

My favorite chapter so far. Lots of details, well, at least more than the previous chapters.

Aragorn and a pig... don't even wanna think about it.

*Cough* Tentacles usually have s*x with their victims *cough* (who said that?)

Anyway- hopefully you'll edit this story and if you don't, it doesn't matter anyway.