Your idea is pretty good, but I wish you could have gone into more detail -- more of Bobby's thoughts and feelings. Seems like your stories are over before they get started. Have you ever thought about doing a longer story? Something with a little more meat? And posted all at once rather than one bite at a time?

Just a suggestion.

This story was so nice and so very well written. Thanks a bunch!

I told you on the loop and I'll tell you again I totally love this story. I love the way you present Bobby to us as "normal" human being, not perfect or awful just human. I also love the way he realizes that even though Carolyn did love him, she has found her soul mate and he is content with that. Thank you for a new and diffrent perspective!

A different voice from the afterlife -- very interesting perspective, indeed! The question as to why Carolyn fell in love with the ghost of Captain Gregg rather than Bobby's is an intriguing one; I'd be curious to hear Carolyn's take on that one -- in a sequel, maybe? :-) I also greatly enjoyed the fact that Bobby sounds real: not a complete bad guy, but not a white hat, either -- very nice. And you can't help but feel for him when he mentions how Jonathan's admiration and liking for the Captain hurts to watch. Thank you for another excellent read!
Chantal