wow, awesome fiction! It surprised me though gohan was so different...i'm not use to seeing this kind of personality in him. reminds me of vegeta lol. you did a great job making a different aspect of him though...very well plotted and written! keep up the good work. (videl is good too...but i hate her blah! shes so mean to him in the real series!)

Good so far

Excellent chapter but I have a question. Is Videl pregnant?

just wanted to let you know that it is really interesting this new gohan that i am reading and would like to know what your other site is so that i can read some of the lemon scenes! so please get back to me on that as soon as possible, thanx!

I don't know if you still look at these reviews but it would be nice to read the *extra* scenes

I really hope you aren't just going to leave this fic alone.
Out of all the fics that have been left incomplete in the last year or so, this is the one I would most love to see finished.

No! I went to your Site and it was on Hitaus (or whatever you spell it) =3 Well... I guess I have to wait *camps outside of your house*

Please uodate this story soon it's really getting good.

awsome fic dude! can ya send me those lemons to my sisters email? it's the one i gave ya. yea.

Please, please update soon, k? I love this story so much!

I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

hey, i loved this fic, but could you sent me the link to your site so i can read all the others oyu have made and are uncensored? thx

I serched your homepage from top to bottom twice, and I still couldn't find thr lemon from this chapter! Could you just e-mail me the link?

i liked you rstory... please email me the lemon on chapter 2... tnx!

Are you gonna update?