hehehehe wonderful!

good story

This was a great story. Again, i wish that star wars could have gone a little bit more like this...you know, without vader and padme dying. Great job!

Great adventure with the twins in a wonderful AU that would have been so cool if it hadn't turned into the family drama we now know :)

Great job, dear!

Keep it up!

Love

Mireille X

Oh I just loved this story! It's so nice to read a happy story about the Skywalker family, the happy life they should have had. *sigh* I was smiling throughout the entire thing. I also loved the interaction between Anakin and the twins. Anakin strongly reminded me of my own dad in this fic, especially at the "Aww Dad!" "Aww Luke!" part, my dad's done the same thing to me a few times. Anyway, great job again!

-Dreamy sigh- This was really precious. It's such a lovely story, and I think it balances romance, humor, and those touching little family moments really well. And I'm glad that you've made it realitic in that Ani and Padme aren't exactly the perfect parents...although as parents go, they come pretty close. :) They've got their own misgivings and issues to deal with, such as accepting the fact that their kids are growing up, which was a theme I thought you wove very neatly into this fic. :) I would type more, and point out some of the moments that I thought were particularly sweet or humorous, but I get the feeling that I would end up pasting half the fic in here. So anyways, great job. This is going straight to my favorites. :)

I think I'm starting to see a theme in your "Twins" stories: Anakin-clueless parent, Padmé-master parent. I definitely loved the bigger role you gave Padmé in this installment. She certainly shows everyone who's the boss in this family! Though it seems that in the end the true hero was Jar Jar, with a little help from Obi-Wan! Once again, I love this series! I hope you will write more!

And an excellent ending to another terrific twin tale. I know it's been quite a while, but if there are any more of these in the pipe, I for one would be extremely grateful and excited. :o)

Wonderful job!

Completely hysterical, as usual, but one line out of this chappie really got to me.

"“This is going to be the best holiday ever,” Luke insisted, leaning over the back, “Now that we’re with you, Dad.”"

It was really poignant, a little taste of how things could have been, perhaps. Poor Ani and Padme, though - no romance for them!

Once more, I find myself thoroughly enjoying your fic. You're an amazing writer.

Little Luke and Leia are so cute, and I loved how you brought Obi-Wan into it too.

I have enjoyed the Twins stories you have written I hope you write more like these.

SeaBreeze :-)

I did.

Very cute. Luke and Leia's interaction was perfect.

Beep-beep ... beep-beep ...

“Turn ... off ... the ... alarm,” Padmé moaned.

wow... she's exactly like me...

“I can’t. I look like hell.”

“You look as beautiful as always,” Anakin said to the pillow, jammed over tangled brown hair. “More beautiful than everything beautiful in the entire universe.”

hehehehe...

“Call Representative Binks,” Anakin said, firmly, before cutting it off.

oh, that's kind.

“See, this is Jedi Master Nova-Destroyer,” Luke said, holding up the brown-cloaked action figure.

Anakin munched on a spoon of cereal, trying to hide a smile.

“He’s trying to rescue the Flower Princess –“ he held up Leia’s doll, which was a miniature version of Leia, “- from the evil Sith Lord Darth Dark-Heart. But she won’t let him!”

“Because he’s useless at rescues,” Leia complained, “He’s still trying to figure out how to get past that twig. Meanwhile, the princess is sitting here getting bored. She can take out the Sith Lord by herself! Watch!”

The princess doll proceeded to kick the head off Darth Dark-Heart and then jump on him until he was stomped flat into the dust. Luke and Anakin looked on in rising shock as the attack became increasingly violent.

IT'S A PREDICTION OF THE FUTURE!

“Destiny, Luke,” Anakin said, “The word is destiny. As in ‘we are going sailing today – it is our destiny’. Help me out here, Padmé.”

*snicker*

“It is a fish,” Anakin insisted, “With a tentacle. With an eyeball on the end. It’s not unheard of!”

*shifty eyes*

“No – its choking on our boat, I think,” Anakin said.

ha ha. it deserved it.

“The flower princess! Mean fish!” Leia tossed a rock over the edge, and it hit the fish on the dorsal side of its body. Two eye stalks came shooting out of the water in response, titled up towards the ceiling of the cave. Leia drew back in fright.

uh oh...

“Hello, Anakin.”

“Master!”

“Obi-Wan!” the twins yelled.

SQUE!

“Obi-Wan!” Luke said, “We’re camping, and then we went sailing, and our boat was eaten by a giant fish, and now we’re stuck in a cave, and the comlink is majorly busted! We can’t call anyone for help!”

*rolls on floor laughing*

Anakin groaned. “Tomorrow’s headlines – ‘Senator’s Husband, Jedi, and Children rescued from medium-size fish!’”

hehehehe... poor Anakin... but it's over! ): oh well... o, could you write a story about Luke or Leia as adults, with their own kids? and Anakin spoiling them for revenge? (even though he's a Jedi)

Anakin tossed the spatula away in frustration. It bounced off a pile of dishes, causing half of them to crash into the sink.

that’s happened to me SO many times…

“They seemed pretty upset,” Anakin said, miserably, “I can’t believe we were fighting in front of them!” He turned to Padmé. “Do you think ... do you think we’ve scarred them for life?”

BAHAHAHA!

“But I read this article in one of your fashion holo-magazines that said –“

Padmé looked up in surprise. “You read my fashion magazines?”

“No! Well ... sometimes, if they have interesting articles ... anyway, that’s not the point! The point is –“

o_0

But he’d learnt a long time ago, that sometimes it was better to simply step back, and let Padmé take care of everything.

SOMEtimes?

“No, Ani,” she said, in an overly serious tone, “They were mildly devastated. That’s why they staged that cookie eating contest, and laughed and screamed while they soaked you with the hose. I hope you actually managed to change the coolant in all that mayhem, by the way.”

hehehe...

“They seemed happy,” Anakin admitted, “But maybe this is going to come back and haunt us one day when they’re teenagers. Stars, Padmé, I can’t believe we were fighting in front of them! Over cookies!”

SOMEone's paranoid...

Anakin blinked at the small figure, until he recognized his best friend, Jedi mentor, and the closest thing he had ever known to a father.

OBI-WAN! SQUE!

The hologram of Obi-Wan glanced from side to side in a appraising manner. “I’ll spare you the details,” he said, finally, and cut the call. The hologram blinked out, and Anakin tossed it on the floor beside the bed.

GASP WHERE IS HE? IS HE OK? *is paranoid*

“I’ll help you two pack after breakfast,” Anakin said.

“Can we take a tent?” Luke asked.

“Sure,” Anakin said.

“No!” Padmé called.

“No,” Anakin agreed, hastily.

hehehe...

“If I see that comlink again, I’m going to smash it,” Anakin said, “Then I’m going to toss the pieces in the afterburner. Then I’m going to use the Force to turn the cinders into dust. Then I’m going to kiss you.”

lol.

“I hate sand,” Anakin mumbled, darkly.

hehehehe... that was VERY good...

Luke was shuffling from side to side, looking like he was sitting on a very big secret. Finally, he burst out with: “She said that if moms and dads kiss too much it means they’ll be another baby! Are you guys bringing back a baby from your holiday?”

oh, no... no... DON'T BRING THAT INTO IT!

“Never, ever talk to this Yissa girl again!” Anakin insisted.

i agree.

“Why did you bring your snorkel?” Padmé asked, climbing out of the speeder. “They don’t have a pool, do they?”

“It’s just in case,” Luke said.

*buries head in hands*

Anakin favored them with his most intimidating Jedi stare, one he’d spent many years perfecting.

i BET it took years...

“They need to spend some time on an island with no technology,” Anakin said, “Obi-Wan and I once had to survive for a week in a remote colony which had a religious objection to all technology.”

hehehehehe...

“Any particular reason for the leisurely crawl? Not that I’m complaining, but I think I saw a Shaak pass us twenty minutes back.”

*snickers*

“Why, didn’t Obi-Wan ever –?“

“You’ve got to be kidding,” Anakin said, “He came in one day, and said, in a serious voice,” Anakin paused, and switched to an impression of Obi-Wan, “‘Padawan ... Qui-Gon used to embarrass me by talking about the facts of life, so I’ve decided to spare you the same embarrassment.’”

see? SEE? OBI-WAN knew not to embarass and humiliate him! OBI-WAN knew that it could turn people to the Dark Side! *darkly* that's what happened to Palpatine...

Anakin smiled at his children, feeling his heart melt. “I don’t know what I’d do without you womp rats,” he said, reaching down to ruffle Leia’s hair.

SUCH a cool nickname!

“Ten ways to please your man,” Padmé read from the cover, in an affected voice.

*gag*

Typically, though, the twins didn’t want to get out, despite their fingers and toes being more wrinkled than Yoda.

hehehe...

“Go and dry off – I left towels under the tree,” Anakin said, pointing, “Remember – last one out is a Devorian slime worm.”

o...

“That’s enough, kids,” Anakin said, wary of having his entire life story divulged in the next few seconds.

*snicker*

“Sure they do,” Luke said, “They get older and older and then they go supernova. Boom!”

“That isn’t reassuring,” Anakin mumbled.

Hehehehe… my thoughts exactly…

“Mom, can I roll down the hill?” he asked, pleadingly. “Dad said we could.”

i wanna roll down the hill!

“Well if they get too tall and heavy I can always use the Force. Size matters not.”

look at Yoda…

Anakin cut him off. “Even if it was the lake monster, which it wasn’t, there’s no reason to be scared. What’s it going to do? Crawl up on land, find its way to your tent, and eat you?”

His children stared back at him with wide eyes, looking even more terrified.

lol… but GASP, its over… *reads note*

yay! onto part 2!

PS :O he’s deceiving Obi-Wan. shame. *wags finger*