That is the most touching, saddest, make-me-want-to-kill-those-bastard-raise-them-and-kill-them-again, soul-injustice, god damn enraging, disgusting-piece-of-**, tear-shedding, want-to-rip-them-to-pieces, and beautiful story I had ever read in my entire life. That bastard going to be living in hell with that faceless creature. Hope he suffer bad for what he had done and I 'mean' suffer BAD. Severus got his and now I'm waiting for his.

And don't get me started on that dementor. That creep. Kind of exotic if you don't think about the no-face-disgusting-mouth-no-senses-cold being.

I would have written more, but I don't think you guys would like the long list I have thought of putting down.

Wow. That was... intense, awsome, insane, powerful, and most definitely dark. But very nice. However short the darn thing was, it was worth the time. I liked it a lot. It was a very good look into the snake's lair. The betrayal and lies and deceit found at every turn. The love and all that other nice stuff that can still be found buried underneath and the tragic story of one who realized it far too late.

Okay. Sorry about that, I can get a bit carried away sometimes. Anyway, good story.

Awesome!

this story is awesome, will you continue it?

Ouch you're making me cry. Such a great story, I mean how often do you really start crying while reading... well anything? I just have to say I love this story. Although Lucius should be hanged upside down for a few hours so he get some damn blood into his brain... might help him think better...

Wow! That was intense and one of the saddest fanfics I've ever read. My poor Severus...it must be so hard to handle that betrayal. Lucius deserves what he gets. It was beautifully written. Every scene was skillfully described, making it so emotionally real. Amazing!

Weasleygirl-ca

That was really good although I do not like the pairing very much. Very sad, I nearly cried, too.
Meta

You not only broke my heart, you shattered it to pieces.. *sob*...

Very intense piece, with all those hints... wonderful!

I'll put it in the C2 for Shortfics... *sniff*

I am just about to catch up with my must-read-list.. I wanted to read this for a long time now, as well as Venomous 2, but somehow.. ah, whatever... here I am ;-)..

All I can say about this yet is, I am speechless... Wow, Death is beautiful - or at least beautifully written in this fic. Poor Severus, you just broke my heart.. :-(

On to chapter 2, hehe..

*snuggles both of them*
oh my god, this is so cute. (*thinks* is "cute" the right word?) anyway i htink you know what i mean... its going on my favourites.
cya
DK

It was sad... You made me cry.

Wonderful little story. Wonderful written.

Keep on.

yours
Angel 1291

o_O

I've read two out of the three stories you've written, and I didn't know you wrote them both.

I feel incredibly stupid now.

You really do have a nack for writing, and I loved this story in paritcular and shared it with two friends. We were all brought to tears by it.

Anywho, I'm off to read that sequal of yours. I did so wanted to know ah tahppened to Luicus in Venemous...

Argh, you killed him! How could you do that, sob? This is so sad. But brilliantly written and extremely intense. But please promise that this will be the only story with Sev ending dead, I couldn't bear it if you killed him in your other stories, too.

You've got my crying liek an idiot in front of my dads computer, and he's saring at me weird cause I can't see to type fast like I usually do. I have go read some fluufy piece of ** now...

that was so sad!
thank u for the amazing fic!
-mystical panther