Wow this is awsome keep up the great work

dear gamerctrum,I'm no longer going too view fan fiction, this website was cool a couple years back, now I'm almost 14 and this website is bogus, the Pokemon fics are awful, this fic and tormented romance is running far too long, so is forsaken legend, the people on the ffx-2 fics are crazy and horrible writers, and I don't like inuyasha anymore. So I'm leaving and not coming back, finish this fic if you want, but I doubt anyone is reading anymore, this was my favorite one of all time. Just saying goodbye to this no longer cool website and you.

I have something to say...while this has been such a GREAT fanfic, it has disappointed me a tidbit. First of all, I think it will personally be easier if you sped up the process instead of dragging the story on. It might annoy people at the tens of thousands of random OCs in one story before the story hits a plot twist or somethin'. Besides that, the story is great, still one of my favs. X3...Although, I want to be honest so, I'll say I'm still thinking about Gaspard, LOL! (Again, What can I do? I'm a fan, lol)

Excuse me for my rudeness, I'm just getting a little impatient. I just really wish you would give this story an UPDATE@!! Please understand this is my favorite story along with that Zelda story you are writing. I don't even like Zelda, I think it's overatted.
You are a Great writer but just like J.K. Rowling, I wish you would get those stories out their sooner. Plus this is the only fic I'm Reviewing still (actually I'm lying, but I do hardly ever review stories anymore). So it would just be nice if you can review my two favorite stories on this entire website. On a small note I would like to point out this the only story ever I stayed all night up trying see what happened only to be dissapointed that it's far from finished (sad face).

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Hey buddy, for the longest time I wanted to let you know I'm loving this fanfic. I've been reading it since way back, but I never got the chance to tell you. So keep going! It's great!

Totally awesome! Please update soon, I really want to see what happens next! I don't usually like reading stories with characters that I don't know but I gave this fic an exception. Please continue it.

Nice job, but could you pick up the pace a little?

hey there, once aging you have done a good job.
I'm glad that you could use my moonlight surgestion.
if I may come whit another one.
if you are going to make a love interest for Cain.
Then I surgest that she should be a sweet, innocend and caring girl.
you know that type of girl who whit her cute face, allright looks and kind ways simply melts Cains cold "dirty" heart.
hope you can use this, then...untill the next chapter...

nice dc2 ficcy... update soon!

Sorry I forgot to review. I read this about a week ago, but had to leave for school. Now I'm on Christmas break! Yay! I can review now. Nice chappie. Nice fluff. Nice Gore. (to me) Nice overuse of descriptive words. New TFL is up. Heim Rada Honeymoon is up too. Please Read and Review. Keep Writing.

ORacle Master

This chapter was the best one to me! Had a lot of humor, saddness, and Monica is going against that Saro guy! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, yeah, and congrats on you Basic Training and the honor of being a part of the world's greatest Air Power!

AWESOME CHAPTER! But sometimes I felt like you abondened fanfiction,but still a great chapter. Next time we won't be so patient so we'll be expecting you to update faster from now on.

Dragon: Monica got in the water second, so it's her fault.
Pug: How could you make me wait for all that blood? You evil person...
Dragon: Okay, Miroku. Hands off the crazy princess.

Finally, you updated! For a second, I was worried that this fic would turn out to be discontinued..._._; I can't wait until the next chapter and that's great for you! ^^