Good work. Short, sweet and cookies at the end. Time to check your other works.

. oh

. Yeah

Go couples

Can't stop reading.

Hurray for drama.. shame it's so short.

O.O

-.- We need more teen Logan fanfics. Got any recomendations ?

Oh I want those two together T.T

Drama and a cliffhanger. Goody

A bit slow, but that's expected.

Interesting idea.

Great job! Beautiful. I really loved it... I know it's over and everything, but I think maybe Logan should have had a flashback to when Thomas was beating him.. maybe it's me.. :)

It was beautifully done, you're an excellent writer! (Claps)

I hope you update soon.

I hope you write a sequel. I want to know where Hallie and Logan end up, what they end up doing, whether they stick together or drift apart...well, I just want to know what comes after!
It is a good stopping point for the story. It really is. It's perfect; you leave your readers happy knowing what happened, but at the same time we want to know what's going to happen next. I'll keep my eyes out for more stuff from you.

*Grabs rotten tomato* Ya can't stop there! I love this story!
*drops tomato again* Ahh well yer the writer...
Thanks for the good story!
I hope to read more from you!
wolvster

This is great! I really like the interaction between Logan and Hallie!
It was a good decision to put the reason for Thomas being so mean in the story!
I hope you'll write more soon!
wolvster

wow this just gets better and better, i hope thomas realizes what hes doing to Logan, as for LOgan and hallie yay!, i hope u got more in dept with them, maybe a sequal of possible marriage and other things. i dunno well its ur story and either way i know i'll keep on liking it so great job and keep up the great work.