very cute. I'd like to see a longer version of this and a scene after the visit to the tendos.

Note that Larry F has taken this over and is producing a version that is a bit different.

[…will have to check that out]

A cat chuckled Somewhere

[Why would ‘somewhere’ be capitalized? It looks out-of-place]

A serjeant or

[sergeant?]

/Joining a noble cause and opposing a tyrant,

[The clichés got old a while ago. Are we done yet?]

get your a$$ up there,

[Corny failed attempt to avoid profanity. Either use it or don’t]

area by nearly inch.

[_an_ inch]

The Guide says that it only takes a year for the Curse to stabilize enough for me to use the 'Spring Of Drowned Man' and change back for good."

[Huh, that’s actually a clever reason to not have them cure the curse right then and there. The only thing I’m confused about is whether Shampoo and Ukyo are with them – they’re not mentioned, but that doesn’t necessarily mean they’re not there]

There was an opening. Akane was a trained martial artist. She took the opening. The table impacted the young man rather suddenly and brutally.

[Points 2]

"Because you hate boys, Akane." Nabiki nodded

[This is certainly going to put the Tendos on Ranma’s bad side]

Since the limo's in the area anyway, I'll just give them a call and we can be done with this. The other two quite obviously want nothing to do with me. I can go back to college tomorrow anyway."

"Limo," repeated Nabiki. She stopped pushing Akane forward.

"College?" Kasumi looked up and blinked.

[Funny twist of the scene]

Why can't I be the one to be the knight come charging in to do the rescue?"

"Out of character," answered Ukyou, Nabiki, and Shampoo simultaneously.

[Points 5]

"That isn't necessarily a given, Kasumi. I got good lines and parts in 'Future Tense' and the 'Cat Scratch Fever' revision. Not that anyone noticed." Akane made a dismissing gesture.

[You know what’s funny? This is even funnier than the main story so far]

And the idea of Ranma falling in Spring Of Anthropomorphic Somewhat Wise But Mainly Affectionate & Playful Tiger has *some* appeal."

[I wonder if anybody’s ever done that. It’s unique, moreso than ‘divergence fic where Ranma ends up with a girl curse]

Reading from the end of the list: Nice little tongue in cheek read here.

This isn't exactly "Spring of Drowned Tigger", but it comes close - and FFnet won't let me do a second comment there. Just hope you're listening ...

Enjoyed "Drowned Tigger", and have created an interesting gift for you, related to it. Let me know where I can send it so it'll reach you. And if you're wary, I can't blame you - check with Nightelf, check out my own stories, whatever.

Ellen

O,o? There's a calvin and hobbes crossover? this I have to see, whats it called?

Very good start to this... Would it be too late to consider updating this?

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Thank you!

Ooh, very nice twist on Ranma 1/2. With an emphasis on twist.

cute, frightning, but cute

funny stuff.

I like it. Did you really do a Calvin and Hobbes xover? Send me the title!

akane-bashing fic. what else is new?

really good story, well written, but unfortunately too short. i would LOVE to see it continue, but if ur looking for good reading material, this is defintaly worth it!

(snicker) The "Calvin and Hobbes" mention was absolutely hilarious! (Any plans on that? It'd make a good spam-fic...)

This is... um... different. I lost track of what happened too much. This deserves a major rewrite.