 ElricKeyblade 4/29/10 . chapter 1HAHAHAH this is SO funny- and totally AWESOME! Great job with this! bd |
 Lady Ling Da 3/5/02 . chapter 1Hey ALF, its SKy Queen. remember? I submitted fanart to your site? well i love your new layout...i love your fics as well : ) well i thought id look for your fics here and guess what? I found what i was looking for. Well i hate to cut short but Im working on a piece of writing. I just finished one! -.- lotsa work. have a nice day |
 Leia Skywalker 1/26/02 . chapter 1I just went back through my rewiews and realized that I hadn't reviewed you back like I had promised. I'm sorry!
I enjoyed reading your fic! It was very well written! |
 Katah 10/5/01 . chapter 1I can just imagine the twins as gangsters... I actually had to perform a play like that in school! |
 indigo 9/28/01 . chapter 1 That was funny as hell! I liked the part when Nappa tried to fit the hat on Vegita's head. Chichi with her pans was an awesome touch. Keep writing! *. |
 Speed 8/31/01 . chapter 1 LOL!
Ur story is SOOO hilarious!
Do a sequel PUH-LEASE!
Nyways, keep up the amazing work
:)
Speed |
 Euterpe1014 7/6/01 . chapter 1terrific! absolutely terrific! and i liked the fact that the women, instead of gokou, get a chance to save the day...please, please do a sequel! |
 Secret Sailor Destiny 6/13/01 . chapter 1Hello! You read one of my stories I read one of yours...this is actually pretty good...I was thinking about having Sakura possesed by a clow card but I changed my mind. She will be back to normal soon. Don't sweat it. You are welcome to e-mail me with how you think the story should continue and I'll keep it in mind when I write the second chapter.
Yours Truly,
Sailor Destiny |
 Chris 6/12/01 . chapter 1 Very funny story and great twist at the end, delightfully hokey |
 Nanni 4/28/01 . chapter 1 HahHa! Dead on! No really, sadly enough I read alot of gumshoe tales and this is dead on! I liked it alot. Keep writing! |
 Shadowngel 3/4/01 . chapter 1lol! |
 Mango Madness 1/24/01 . chapter 1Funny adaptation. Loved the bit with Nappa trying to put a hat on Vegeta's head. Good story! |
 Jansen 1/18/01 . chapter 1 I loved it! _ |
 Forau 1/17/01 . chapter 1Very, very nice. I can remember Krillin in his cool White Suit. Very good story. |
 slaveofosiris 1/17/01 . chapter 1*snickers* Quite a parody... I usually don't like humor fics, or Kuririn fics, but a loved this one. The humor was very appropriate for the characters and the tone it was written in was perfect. Kudos. |