 rogue's shadow 2005-07-18 . chapter 1 GOD! This is so not right! How can this story only have 30 reviews. I mean, this story is INCREDIBLE! Seriously! Not to mention it's halarious. It's not everyday a person can find comical fanfiction like this and it still have a plotline without being completely random! Just ain't right, just ain't right! I've been an avid reader ever since I can remember and I can tell the good stuff from the...well...not so good stuff. *sweatdrops* Anywayz...you should really continue writing this story because it is such a pure stroke of brilliance! I noticed you haven't updated in a while, though...this makes me sad T_T But it's okay, cuz I know you won't dissapoint!
Well, bye-bye Human. Bye person...NICE TO MEET YOU, INDIVIDUAL! Lolz. Sorry...Brian Regan joke...yeah, I'm weird lolz.
Later,
Melody |
 blueangel11isdead 2004-09-02 . chapter 9OMGOMGOMG...this is such an amazing story! you NEED NEED NEED NEED to continue! plzz finish this, plz dont make this one of those stories that are never completed, its to good to go there..plz continue it..plz??
thank you... |
 L. C. Webbs 2004-06-23 . chapter 9you said in chapter 8(?) that you have never seen one that revolved around christrianity.. ya know what you are wrong both trigun and helsing revolve around christrianity and i'm sure there are others...but i didnt like how laithe and the others were forcing thier beliefs on people because you cant do that you can tell them about it but the whole point of faith is to believe without haveing proof...the rest was ok.. but you cant thats just not right even in a fanfic... |
 Dysthe 2004-06-06 . chapter 1Cool story. Update soon:// |
 evil-kenshin 2004-05-04 . chapter 9great story, can't wait for the next chapter |
 Kiseki no Tenshi 2004-05-01 . chapter 9Wicked Chapt!! ^_^ |
 NephyRiddle 2004-05-01 . chapter 9Neat story, as always. And, as always WRITE MORE :) |
 d'Anima 2004-04-30 . chapter 9o, perfect! Hehe, Yami and Malik are so stupid! I couldn't stop laughing at them. They aren't OOC either. That's good. You should have more of those two! I'd laugh if they stuffed up the mission...Hehe keep updating! SOON! |
 Kiseki no Tenshi 2004-04-22 . chapter 8Wicked Chapt!! ^_^ |
 d'Anima 2004-04-21 . chapter 8SCREAM! This is the best chapter EVER! I'm soo happy you finally updated! Your plot is getting really good, I can't wait to see what happens next. And who's Clover Wilman? Poor Yami, I feel sorry for him. But everything seems realistic and fits together. I'm learning more about Christianity too!
~Morgana~ |
 LinkDragon 2004-04-17 . chapter 7WE MACHINE AUTHORESS HEHEHEHEHEHE PUDDING IS GOOD LIKE STORY WEGOOGPOOP |
 d'Anima 2004-04-12 . chapter 7NO! Yugi got shot! AH! Hehe, I'm okay. Lovely chapter. Aww, Marik is soo cute! He acts like such a toughie but really he's all soft and mushy like a marshmallow!
~Morgana~ |
 Samantha J.C 2004-04-10 . chapter 7 I love your story! It is awsome!
But I have one question though...is Laithe part Angel? and is she perhaps...no I wont ask that. But great story girl! Its wonderful...but you need to work on your editing skills a little, no offence. |
 Juliette 2004-04-10 . chapter 7 Hey, your story is great. And when I have time, I'm going to check out your other stories as well. But it's after midnight and I have to be up at 6 in the morning to be somewhere... I love it how you have impossibly long chapters! It's great! And I don't understand why you don't have more reviews! I would have reviewed your last chapters as well, but when I started reading your story, you were already on this chapter. And your spelling mistakes aren't as bad as some other authors that I've read, it's refreshing to be able to understand what you're reading! lol, can't wait til your next update! |
 Kiseki no Tenshi 2004-04-09 . chapter 6^_^
brilliant Update!
It's so funny! |