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Reviews For: Watching Hermione
PlasmaBomb 2004-07-28 . chapter 1
*ahem*

AW.

*bows*
KateM 2004-06-24 . chapter 1
Encore, encore. What will Hermione do with her newfound knowledge?
Deense 2004-04-29 . chapter 1
Hey there sweetness!
You are food at his. Of course, I read the HR/R first...
Now, you write this in present tense and its the hardest tense to use successfully. YOu succeed, yay! But, there are a couple minor tense and spelling errors (sigh, I am such an editor/beta at heart).
Everything else is good, i like the flow, the characterization... Yay you
Deense
story645 2004-04-14 . chapter 1
aww, very cute fic, everyone's in character. I really liked the last line "I can’t wait to find out what she does with it."- so adorable, brings a smile to my face.
Topaz Waters 2004-04-10 . chapter 1
Aw...You SQ siggie was whack, this is so cute! A few little errors like "peak" instead of "peek", but that's all...I love it!
crazed-laff 2004-03-31 . chapter 1
oh wow! i loved this story!it made me laugh how u put that harry gave ron the "you're so busted look" lol
dayzray14 2004-03-31 . chapter 1
You are a really good writer!
I like the story so far please keep it going!!
also i love the pairing of ron and hermione!!
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