 PlasmaBomb 2004-07-28 . chapter 1*ahem*
AW.
*bows* |
 KateM 2004-06-24 . chapter 1Encore, encore. What will Hermione do with her newfound knowledge? |
 Deense 2004-04-29 . chapter 1Hey there sweetness!
You are food at his. Of course, I read the HR/R first...
Now, you write this in present tense and its the hardest tense to use successfully. YOu succeed, yay! But, there are a couple minor tense and spelling errors (sigh, I am such an editor/beta at heart).
Everything else is good, i like the flow, the characterization... Yay you
Deense |
 story645 2004-04-14 . chapter 1aww, very cute fic, everyone's in character. I really liked the last line "I can’t wait to find out what she does with it."- so adorable, brings a smile to my face. |
 Topaz Waters 2004-04-10 . chapter 1Aw...You SQ siggie was whack, this is so cute! A few little errors like "peak" instead of "peek", but that's all...I love it! |
 crazed-laff 2004-03-31 . chapter 1oh wow! i loved this story!it made me laugh how u put that harry gave ron the "you're so busted look" lol |
 dayzray14 2004-03-31 . chapter 1You are a really good writer!
I like the story so far please keep it going!!
also i love the pairing of ron and hermione!! |