I'm sorry, but this is a format flame. You can't expect me to read 320k+ words when the formatting is frelled. At a bare minimum, there should be a different line for each speaker. The paragraphs are too dense.

If you fix this, please message me, as anything some writes this much of has to have something going for it.

I just can't beleive that we have come to the end! A very impressive body of work you have put together. I am very sorry to see it come to a close. You developed such an interesting branch off from the Moya crew. The characters you brought to light were all very entertaining and original. Would have loved to see them continue on...but maybe in the future?

Thanks for the glimmer of futures for Ryalla / Shor and Koronna / Capt. Lazarus. These two pairs did a great deal to draw me even further into this tale. Their bridging the span of differences of species and the possible speed bumps were quite the ride. Really would have loved to heard more on Koronna and her possible interaction with the Capt. and his daughter. Might have been some interesting perceptions of the younger Lazarus and her view of their relationship. Thanks for making them so interesting!

Well done all the way round! I look forward to any future work you might put out. Thanks again for all the hard work...and a very happy holidays to you as well!;)

A very action packed chapter to be sure. You really managed to put this growing cast of characters through their paces. Enjoyed the pace and the action...very hard hitting moments for those who gave their all for the team.

Ryalla and Shor were nice to see in action. Her concern for his abilities push her to extreme with his training. He might be able to live through the battle...but will he survive her love? LOL!;)

And I was glad to see Capt. Lazarus and Koronna making some further head way with their developing relationship. Their possible pairing is a bit different then others seen here, a slightly different speed, but no less interesting. Enjoy seeing them growing closer and appreciating the others talents. Thanks for adding this relationship to the mix!

A very well done addition! Thanks for the hard work and making this available for Christmas. A very nice present indeed!;)

Very happy to see this drama continues! You certainly are filling out the stage with a varied asortment of players to make this tale an interesting read. Some of the new additions look to be able to heat up a few issues on their veiw of humans. Certainly having Lazarus as an officer over a scaren solders will make for a few nice twists I'm sure. Our favorite Sarg-Maj. might even have a few things to say on the good Captain's behalf...or he on hers for that matter!

Well played with putting the teams together for the next phase of their adventure. Looking forward to getting a bit more on this one very soon. Well done...and thanks for hanging in there and providing a great read!;)

Its always nice to see an addition to this story. A very interesting trasition with the taking in of Blood Hand members and the refusal of the elder Council members. Loved the view of Lazarus and his hard line with these council members...and their obvious feelings for him as well. Harrigan is still a very powerful character, but I like the depth that you give to all those around him. Very much looking forward to our crew getting a bit of action soon! Well done!

Another outstanding chapter! You certainly kept the readers on the move with this one. Enjoying the amount of work that you are putting into getting us to know and understand what makes each of these characters tick. This chap. saw a great deal of work for Ryalla and Shor...they just keep getting better with each chapter. It seems that trouble will always be a near with these two around...but together they are more then up to it!

Interesting plot twist with the entrance of an old enemy from Tal's past. You certainly had me feeling for John and how this type of event wouldd affect him and the others. Also enjoyed seeing the unit willing to make things happen when their leader is so out of it. Liked how you worked their motives and how their actions might be perceived in a military view.

Also enjoyed the way you addressed the new rank structure...and how lost some were with their new roles. Koronna and her new found rank really seem to fit the bill! Loved the "reality check"! Also enjoyed how the rest of the crew are viewing the realationship between our Sgt. Maj. and a certain Captain...outstanding that! Looking forward to the follow up on this tale!

This new post was a real joy to read! You packed a great deal of character development and action into this one. I could not have seen these two getting married without hitch or two along the way...and you certainly placed a few very large hitches! Great wedding!

Glad to see that we had Ryalla and Shor getting a bit more action...and Shor is really coming along as a character, It looks as though he may able to give any of them a run for their money very soon!

It was also nice to see how you made up with Koronna in this new post. I liked the way that you are fleshing this character out...what her likes and dislikes...her loyalties and her new found attractions. Because of her background and physical makeup...I see more then a few interesting questions to be addressed. Really liked how Lazarus and his newly entered daughter are dealing with Koronna...this might get real interesting! Keep up the good work, look forward to more!;)

Very nice to see another chapter added to this one! I enjoyed the various entanglements you threw at our team. They seemed to come through each hurdle in their own unique way again...a few broken noses along the way for good measure!

I did feel kind of sorry for the spot poor Korronna seems to have fallen...how many yards of fabric did her dress eventually take anyway? LOL! You really need to make that up to her!:)

Looking forward to next chapter as always! Thanks for sharing!:)

Great chapter.
I can't wait to read about the wedding :) Hurry up please.

Interesting home coming for our growing little group! Liked the added views at some of the new members of the team...and those of the earth based members picked up in the last chapter. The mix keeps you coming back and just wanting to know more. Looking forward to that!

It was nice to see Tal getting closer to her union with John. It's very refreshing to see how you portray Tal and John in their relationship. This pairing just keeps getting better with each additional chapter.

Only got a few glimpses of Ryalla and Shor in this one...but you still managed to get Ry to steal a scene with her handling of the ribbing directed at her and Shor. Loved the way she makes her feelings known!LOL! Looking forward to more!

Alot of action was packed into this one...and everyone seemed to be holding their own in this group. Liked how some of the new characters are showing their individual talents off. Very well done!

Looking forward to more...this group you have developed is very interesting. The relationships that you continue to work into the stories are what keep drawing me back for more. Keep up the good fight!:)

The story keeps getting more interesting with every new chapter. Can't wait for your next chap.

Really enjoyed this chapter! Alot of new faces are coming into the picture, seems to be shaping up into a very interesting unit. I am really looking forward to how these new characters will impact the current crew.

Tal and Harriganwere again very enjoyable to follow in this chapter. they seem to have a firm hold on things going on. They even appear to have developed a parental oversight of the younger crewmembers. I like this view of them!

Ryalla and Shor are certainly staying busy! They are as entertaining as Tal and John are. This young pair have caught my attention and I look forward to see how you develope their relationship! They seem to have a great deal of potential.

Also enjoyed the new look at Kran as a family man. Poor fella seems to have been away from those he cares about a litle too long. These new characters should be fun to see how they fit into the unit during operations. Over all, very well done! Appreciate all the hard work that you are putting into this...looking forward to more!

oh... I cant wait for the reaction of ths IASA when the Cry Havok arrives in the Sol system.

An interesting addition. Enjoyed the military and civilian political wrangling that accompanied this chapter. Harrigan is none too subtle with his actions….or words for that matter!

Also enjoyed the entrance of Shor being brought into the group. It was also nice to see that there maybe another budding relationship in the works. I look forward to what you might have in store for Ryalla and Shor...it could be quite a ride!

Aeryn's response to the parade...was very much along the lines of my previous post. I was pleased to see that some recognition and reluctance at falling back to her previous profession. I like the way that you had her withdrawal. It was also nice to see how you had her and John dealing with Harrigan's request. The verbal sparring between these two is never a wasted vent...that's the appealing element of their relationship. They can argue and steal come together at the end. Well done!:)