That ending was really, really sad in its own way. Good, but sad. More please. I read you deleted the sequel, but I'd still like to know what happened next.

Hah, should have known the Ancients weren't that nice. Liking this.

Jack''s conversation with Carter made me giggle. Good stuff. I guess it's the Ancients' idea of a favour returned.

Wonderful. This story is deep and evocative and haunting. You are rapidly becoming one of my favorite authors.

good story! SO glad you carried it on!

I think I've read this chapter before. In fact, I'm positive. In fact, I believe it is still in my locker.
It was so good! And I liked the silent dialogue with Sha're and Dan'yer. That's such a cool way to pronounce it. Dan'yer. Much like Hannah's Danyal. My Daniel is relatively simple. Daniel. Unless there's a Hebrew way to pronounce it...
Sorry I didn't log in - I know if I do I'll get distracted from studying for that math quiz we have Wednesday and will thus fail it, making me suicidal. Just kidding, I rarely get suicidal. ;)

I may have betad but just to remind you I loved this story and I'm looking forward to the next one.

coolio! I wanna find out what happens though so you MUST keep writing!

Yay! I liked this chapter! I'm glad Charlie's ok... *tries to decided between grinning and sighing with relief and ends up sneezing*
Anyway, thank you for your note at the top! Yay for Ho! (That's not what everyone thinks it is.) I still have to get permission from my Dad, but other than that...
Keep up the great work!

NO! dont stop please! i didnt have a chance to review becuase ive only just caught this story. things are so crazy at school that i havent had time to read things let alone review things! please dont stop!!

Gnarf! Fanfiction won't let me review logged in, so I have to do it anonymously on a different computer. Stupid Fido Wonder Pup Rejection Letter Code #1.
So... I won't say anything that might, you know, because yes, I was dumb last time, so um. I liked Aurel person. Is she the goddess that raises people from the dead that you wanted to do you character sketch on?
And Charlie's eyes glowed! Oh, wonder what's going to happen now! *snickers*
See ya!

Please don't stop. This is wonderful!

Oh its getting good. keep going!

Yay! Not much to say.
I like the romance, especially since it's after marriage. *winks*

it seems okay now, you must have changed it.
good