wow i like your story those two are also one of my fav couples for GW anime..hope you could finish your story

FINISH THIS STORY YOUR KILLING ME HERE.

Seriously this is one of the best plot ideas i have seen ever, so please finish it. Oh and i think the other wives are a little too outwardly visious my grandfather has more than on wife and his wife is like kiki cause the society would never allow her to be anything else. God forbid she ever raise her voice to my grandfather in public. Plus i feel there should be a better underlining reason Quatre married these other wemon instead of tradition. You know maybe peer and financial pressure like these wemon are the daughters of very powerful men who could bring down the Winner foundation.

Just some suggestions for someone whose lived it!!

By the way luv luv luv this fic so please continue it

Hi! I'm back! I can't believe I caught this update so late. I think I assumed I reviewed it already but I find counts your chapter 10 as 11 and so on...But anyway, I loved the chapter and I really hope you continue with it soon. I'm on an odd week of spring break (most don't have it till this week after this one) so I'm going to attempt to update my own stories. Good luck, enjoyed it, good job on the children's perspectives, and one of your devoted fans will be keeping an eye out...

I kinda like the seed angles... truthfully... I'd like Q to do the right thing and screw the others up the creek for Dorothy. Because truthfully, he shouldve just bucked the trend and refused those economic marriages. Perhaps if you could go into the history and tell us readers about the first economic marriage happening, that would give us more insight to what preciusely "forced" Quatre to "choose" the "tradition".

I love it...especially the kids...please keep writting...and update soon...

hey, the story is good... I'll expect the other chapters are on the way... good job...

I love this story!
Ezra is really my favorite. Vassilisa and Ezra complement each other the cold and sensible Ezra with the fiery and freedom fighting/justice fighting Vassilisa.
I also read your author's note, and I totally agree that Lacus should not have been the Chairman it should have been really Yzak because he deserved it with all the loyalty a coordinator ever gave.
I admired what you did showing the children's perspective on the matter of the parent's divorce and I most certainly blame Quatre on this. He deserves the ** of a second wife he has for even marrying her in the first place. I can even imagine Elirea as a social climbing whinny **...
But I do love the characterization even if mixed two universes with it
Praises and thanks
Celena

Welcome back...i really do love this story and i am very anxious abt the way everything will turn out...it will be very interesting.

update soon

I read this fic so many times but I never reviewed. Sorry about that? I like your story. Its similar to our multicultured country. We Catholics live with Muslims and as long as you can afford to take care of your family you can marry another woman.
"But I think there's a clause that my monogamous political science "male" teacher once said. A Muslim husband can only take on another wife IF the FIRST WIFE ALLOWS IT."
IF I really were Dorothy I would have divorce Quatre the moment he took on a second wife. consumamation or no consummation, the ** is still a LEGAL wife! (Similar to AKO LEGAL WIFE)
Anway sorry from babbling. Probably making amends of not reviewing anway from all of your chapters this really is my favorite. Dorothy is my favorite character. Along with EZRA but that's not the point.
Even if Quatre never consummated his marriages to the other three women that doesn't mean that its right. Why can't Quatre see that Dorothy needs reassurance. And the only assurance she wants is the removal of the three concubines I mean wives?
Is he really that dense? Or is he that power hungry that to get contracts and negotiations he has to marry ** I mean other women...
And I also don't like Caressa that much either. But I think I see a pairing right now? Will there be a Ezra and Vassilisa pairing in this fic?

Normally at the first sign of the dreaded Trowa&Catherine pairing I would be *long* gone. I really must be honest and tell ya how much I *despise* that pairing because I cannot imaging Catherine not being Trowa's sister. But other than that this is a very very well written fanfic and you should be proud of it. Keep it up.
Lady KK

Please continue! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I just checked this story again... Anyway...

I also know two Muslim girls. But their father decided to have just one wife. He loves their mother too much an I think that is sweet. Anyway...

Please update!

Chisakami Saiyuki ^_^

Oh, oh, I have an idea who's children this Vassilisa and Nikki may be. I'll e-mail you my guess if your e-mail is up! Anyways, interesting chapter. Completely focused on the children here and this may be the second plot. I really hope Ezra isn't paired with this Vassilia *cringe* At the most make them friends! And I kind of thought perhaps she was some unknown sibling to the Winner children, but of course now I have my guess. The children all have interesting personalities but I must say I feel sorry for Caressa. I feel like she's going to be cursed like her mother in chasing after a man who hardly knows she's alive (at least for a while, we'll see what happens). Anyway, nice job, no mistakes.

Gerard is such an interesting perk of a character. There's so much you can with him. Yes I am sad he does sound like he's going to be bad news *grimace* But it is interesting how you seem to have two subplots forming here almost. Those wives...what was Quatre thinking? Honestly? o_o Well the next chapter is already written so off I go! Thank you so much for the compliment! I must say you're one of my favorite writers and I am definately a fan. I'm so happy you updated this and I've finally gotten a chance to read it! I wonder if the next chapter will involve the children next...Long live live Q x D fans!

I really luv your story so much!The characters and the sense of humor that Dorothy has. I hope u continue very soon- i luv reading this! Please update soon. Also Happy New Year!