I really liked this a lot, especially the way that you linked up the two different parts of it. I liked the way that you handled Joey's home life and Serenity's place in that and the relationship between Joey and Yugi. Great job!

;-; This is so brilliant. The emotions flow so well and they make my heart ache. I'm not sure if I should coo or cry, but at any rate, I did love the ending. A lot.
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In my opinion, this is _the_ perfect oneshot.

*worships* Gods, I love your work. You write Jounouchi-kun so absolutely perfect. I loved the scene involving him and his sister-- the concept that she was beginning to grasp, the fact that he was left behind. It makes you ache for him so badly, and it's so well-written and has great atmosphere. Likewise, the moment between Yugi and Jounouchi is absolutely brilliant. I can just SEE that. ^^;;
The way he falls asleep on the bed... *heart* Precious... and the ending line? Awesome. So awesome. Heh.

That was stunningly beautiful in it's simplicity and honest presentation. Absolutely wonderful. It was cute, well written and thoughtful, the best of all things.
Thanks for the enjoyable fic, it was great.
~Ryanookami (too lazy to sign in. oh well.)

That was so great! I hope you continue soon, b/c I can't wait to see what happens next! And b/c Joey/Yugi is one of my favorite pairings! There is not enough of them!

I don't usually go for the Jou/yugi pairing, but they're good for fluffy-ness once in a while! Duh, Joey is such a ** sometimes. Anyway, thanks for the cute fic!

Aw! Cute pairing! ^^ Lovely cute lil story. But had not so nice stuff too. Very balanced! ^^ Loved it! ^_^

Aw, this is really well-written. You gave us a nice desciption of Jou's feelings. It was cute, too--especially the ending. ^_^ Is this a one-shot? Oh, please don't say it is... This story has one of my favorite couples (if not, THE BEST COUPLE IN THE WORLD!! XD). I love how Joey likes to take care of Yugi... I bet I know what Yami's teasing him about. ;)