I never thought to review your work, but when I looked at it, I fell into its good creative ability. And you brought back Aya's brother and Chidori, and gave Toya a normal life span. You are the master! And it was a great job of giving Yuuhi a happy ending, too. You are forever praised by the Traitor of All Traitors.

Your ending was NOT fluffy or boring. It was fantastic! I'm so happy! :D! Happy endings rule! YAY!

Sorry, i just watched the ending and was really upset. This fic really cheered me up. Arigato!

AWESOME! im so happy they got together!lol.i love how you brought both my favorite watase books together in a way that worked so good, thats so kind of made the happy but not so happy ending in ayashi no ceres . that is what i would have wanted to happen in the actual books. good job your AWESOME

i loved the way you put in the other characters from x and FFY. ayashi no ceres x and ffy are like my fav animes

hahahahahahahahaha the fushigi yuugi characters hahahaa

i think it's really good and u know that thingy with chidori walking in at that exact moment just fit so well

This would be the third story I reviewed for you, right? (So just in case you haven't noticed I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORIES!)

Oh yeah,I've made a chapter by chapter review for this one. So...

Chapter 1 The starting chapter was nice though a bit angst heavy. It's great that you focused the story on how Yuhi (AXN spelling) felt since the anime never really explored the possible relationship between the two very much. There were some spelling and grammatical errors but it did nothing to diminish the quality of the story.

Chapter 2 Aya's already 9 months pregnant? What did they do to Aki and Chidori? Put them in a freezer then thawed them out on the funeral?

No, this isn't a flame.

But NINE MONTHS? I mean- given that Aya was already pregnant with Toya's child- she wasn't that far off when the battle with Mikage ended. Unless of course their child inherited part of Toya's aging ability.

Still, except for this the second chapter wasn't bad at all. A bit of a cliffhanger but nicely done.

Chapter 3 Another cliffhanger episode. Anyway I like what you did in this chapter with the cast of Fushigi Yugi. It's a welcome change to see them in a 'normal' setting living normal lives.

And just between you and me, Nuriko seemed wonderful as a woman.

Chapter 4 Kaya pala parang napanood ko na ito eh! Well it works! I have no complaints but this seems suspiciously like those one-week mini-series they used to show here in the Philippines. The pacing is a bit fast but it's still very good.

Chapter 5 Gee... I never knew that Hotohori was into pretty young girls. But then again Chidori is about the same age as Yuhi right?

Huh? Only one chapter left? (Sigh) And I was hoping you'd put a Hotohori x Nuriko side-story.

Chapter 6 And so comes the final chapter.

Well it was certainly a WAFFy ending- what with the whole Eye's On Me background music with the rain falling down thing. It's- well maybe it's a bit on the 'corny' side but it really is beautiful.

I wouldn't recommend this fic to somebody who hates sweet stories (or diabetics as I call them) but this is definitely a worthwhile read.

Keep up the good work kid!

"The God of Death returns to the shadows once again..."

-Shinigami-kun(Acolyte)

great

i loved the fy cast in there for a little twist

great fic

Yay! It's completed and everyone is happy!

aw ... that's so sad ...
just a quick hint tho - yes, Yuuhi is upset and most likely yells alot. But I think you're kinda sorta overdoing it on the exclaimation points (aka These things !) Try to use capital letters or italics instead. It provides much more of an IMPACT! see?
Keep up the good work!
Saiko-chan

Yay! A happy ending for everyone! Once again, I must say that you wrote a great Yuhi/Chidori story and I really enjoyed reading it. The sing was a nice touch.

yup yup cant wait! continue soon! lol gona be a happy ending eh? haha better be!

Can't wait to read the next chapter.
PS: Nice job with using Kamui ("sob" poor guy!)

yayz!yuuhi x chidori!
but y a crossover?

Ah man! Just when things were getting to the good part. Oh well, please update soon!