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| CeleryScaresMe 2006-03-27 ch 1,  | abusei think it's either from the garden of eden apple OR the an apple could represent the world, it rots and so dus the world |
| I have no clue 2004-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust like my name says I have no clue |
| eventidespirit 2004-08-03 ch 1, | abuseI haven't read your other reviews for this poem (honestly), but for the title, apples, that refers to Adam and Eve right? |
| WaterAdept0514 2004-07-06 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem! Got any others? |
| ChocolateCurlz 2004-05-07 ch 1, | abuseHaha. I get it, it's the whole, "My-future-is- going-to be-miserable-so I'll-treasure-now" kinda thing, what with the team, er, not being a team thing. Very clever. Future World Ruler, CC |
| Evilbakuragirl 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseaples are a symbol of life? they don't last forever but they have a good time where their really nice and then they go bad... |
| audi katia 2004-04-08 ch 1, | abuseNothing is perfect. And nothing seemingly perfect can last forever. If one can grasp that, one can make it though his or her life in one piece. |
| Supernatural-Psych 2004-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI think it means that before the battle with Warp (in How long is forever?) the world seems perfect, then star goes into the future and the world isn't good. like the part that says 'the trees shall die. animals decay through time, the sun burnt out' what's the prize? |
| NavynBabyBlueSuedeShoes 2004-04-01 ch 1, | abuseOkay, just a guess, (and maybe a really stupid one) but here goes: Okay are you talking about the Garden of Eden? How Adam and Eve's downfall destroyed all the perfection? How sin makes us all evil creatures? "The trees are green, tall, and beautiful." --The sacred tree of The Knowledge of Good and Evil that bore the forbidden fruit? Or Granny Smith Apples? "The sun, shining brightly like a proud god" how Eve desired to be as powerful as God? Or is this how time eventually corroded the Titans' relationships? Yeah, see? I'm probably wrong...:( Oh well, at least I tried! Oh, and please read my story! Peace out ppl. |
| Strappleberry 2004-04-01 ch 1, | abuseWow! You're really good I love writing and reading poetry! Keep writing stories and poems and I'll keep reading them. =) |