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| XxXPorcelainFluxXxX 2006-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseDiction in here is great. Same with emotion. I know you probably want a proper review but I'm horrible at these...I really enojoyed this though. |
| Draco-luver 2004-05-23 ch 1, | abuse*clap-y-ness* That was good, me likie. ;> |
| BlackShield 2004-04-18 ch 1, | abuse... oo that was... er... awesome? no, that doesn't fit... BAH! I can't think of a single friggin word to describe this! oh, well. really... good? ~Blackshield |
| audi katia 2004-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is so true to life. A person can live his or her life one way when he or she is awake. When that person is all alone, he or she can relize what his or her life really is. A lie. |
| NavynBabyBlueSuedeShoes 2004-04-01 ch 1, | abuse*Sniff!* Poor Raven! All alone with no one wanting her! Beast Boy could've helped her, but NO! He just HAD to take Terra instead! Luv ur poems! Keep writing, boy! Get these published or something! loL. Peace out. |
| Amber Skye 2004-04-01 ch 1, | abuseYour writing is impressive. Very deliberate, very well thought out. I've looked over all of your poems, and everything is deep, dark and depressing; it deserves to be called morbid. I love morbid. =) This poem is definitely one of my favorites, especially line 15: "To feel the warmth of pain one last time". And I love how you took the first stanza and used it as the final stanza, only changing the center line a little bit for just the right effect... Beautiful! |