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| Reviews for Pretending |
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   Timber Wolf of Purity 2/3/11 . chapter 4I ...love this. :) Timber Wolf |
| Kurenai no Chinoumi 8/29/05 . chapter 4 Aw! Great fic. It's really sweet and romantic and stuff. :D Keep up the great work. |
| sakura 1/4/05 . chapter 4 this fic is so... great! please make another SASU/SAKU fic pllease? |
| broken down dog 11/10/04 . chapter 4 aw...that was the shortest an the most cutest thing i've read...literally it is. luved it |
| Ako-si-Uchiha-Sasuke 9/12/04 . chapter 4 missed missed emotions T-T _ yah KAWAII! i pls update on make a wish soon ne I'm dying 2 know what will happen next! |
| iluvsasuke 8/26/04 . chapter 1 heheh nice i love sasusaku |
| Metaliczgal 6/18/04 . chapter 4 I like yr story!1 i like SASUKExSAKURA hell yeah! i wike e'm! |
| cocoa-latte 4/6/04 . chapter 4 Great fic! It's a little rushed though ; |
| The Sky Pirate 4/5/04 . chapter 4 Hurrah! SasuSaku all the way! Great fic. I really liked it. I just have a few things to note. I don't mean to say it as flames or complaints because I myself like to have more honest reviews. Firstly, Naruto always refers to Sakura as Sakura-chan, not Sakura-san. And secondly, Sasuke always calls Naruto 'dobe' meaning 'block head' not 'ice block' (though I found that kind of funny _ muaha!). Sasuke seems extremely OOC in this fic. I'm quite sure that even if Sasuke liked someone a lot, he wouldn't decide it in a single day and tell them that he loves them all the time (he sounds clingy. lol). It would be nice if you took the story slower and sort of built up on their romance gradually. Well, that's about all of my remarks. Don't take this as a flame plz. I'll be looking out for more of your stories but if you really don't like these kind of reviews, just tell me and I'll stop. Ja! |
| Ori 4/5/04 . chapter 4 O_o that was quick. Oh well at least its a Sasusaku - my fav. Naruto couple! |
| E-chan Hidaka 4/4/04 . chapter 3 aww how kawaii! cant wait til the next chapter. and its sweet how sasuke visited her. |
| Kichou 4/4/04 . chapter 3 I wonder if some guy will try to get Sakura. What will Sasuke do then? Please write more. |
| viviannnnn 4/3/04 . chapter 3 hahahah continue pleaz |
| Anbu45 4/3/04 . chapter 2 i'm a huge naruto fan...i'm only correcting the personalities of the characters thatz all... Naruto NEVER calls Sasuke "Sasuke-kun" kun is for someone you admire and sasuke isnt particularly someone naruto likes... Sasuke is a LITTLE colder and a little more hard-headed...more of the "concealing his feelings" type... But hey overall your story is AWESOME! |
| Kichou 4/2/04 . chapter 2 Great fic. I hope Neji or someone tries to get Sakura as their girlfriend and Sasuke gets mad and fights for her. Please write more. |
