Awesome - you actually made me cry!That was really powerful stuff.

Pleeaasse update your other stories soon, I am a big fan of your work

you are amazing if you have an IM u can add me I love this.

We just had Freefall and Missing here, so it's all fresh for me! Very good story - very sad.

Great story! Very emotional, exceptionally well written. I feel the same way the outside observer felt. Keep it up!

nice. i liked it. sad. i almost cried, but wonderful at the same time.