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Jessi Tsuki 2008-05-16 ch 7,	abuseAnother great story. Thanks for this ^^
Firebullet19 2008-04-02 ch 7,	abuseI really would like to see what happens in the next story hope you are still working on it the is a really good story in fact all of your Detective Conan story are really good hope to see more soon.
Serphenia 2007-04-19 ch 7,	abuseReally -good- fic! I avoided it the first time around because I can't really deal with ghost stories but...They're -really- good. Love it... I hope to see "Hitonaiya Park" sometime, especially if it has more of Kid ^^
Sorako 2006-03-08 ch 7,	abuseThis story simply ROCKED. It's well-written, clever, has my favourite pairing and it had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. You don't find Conan fanfiction that has an actual mystery in it very often, and it was great to be able to read a fic with such a clever plot for a change. Plus, your characterisations were brilliant, especially the relationship between Heizou and Shizuka, Heiji and his dad and how it influences Heijis behaviour towards Kazuha. I read the prequels to this story too and enjoyed them a lot, but this one definitely takes the cake. The whole idea of Heiji being able to see ghosts is very intriguing, especially since it's an ability that collides quite a bit with Heijis usual down-to-earth character. Also, much love to Frankie. He's a great comic relief and extremely cute, in a twisted way. :D Even though I'm afraid the chances of that happening are slim - if you were to write a sequel to this trilogy, I'd love you forever. Especially since you already dropped a hint for a possible plot... :-)
Jeva 2004-10-26 ch 7, anon.	abuseSwah! I've been really liking this series of yours! ^.^" Chounoryouku Hattori Heiji. Yep, this has certainly been a good read and a wonderfully original storyline. Too bad you haven't gotten the next one out, I'm very much looking forward to it (Kaitou Kid...-squees!-). And I'm glad you explained where the heck Franky's head went. It was getting kind of weird imagining a headless dog howling and such. Kind of feel sorry for Heiji having to deal with the weirdness of it all... Gah, I would say more but I just don't know what to say besides I envy you and your writing abilities. I haven't been able to turn out a good fic in a while myself. -.-' Anyway, I hope you continue to the series. It's a really great one! ^.~!
Becky 2004-09-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice!And I want to read more...
Miya 2004-05-31 ch 7, anon.	abuseI'm looking forward to the next story in this series. I discovered "Detective Conan" about 10 days ago so I'm not sure if your characters are out of character or not but the story is well written. The people feel real not 'cardbord' and the descriptions are very clear but unobtrusive. This goes for all three of these stories I just didn't stop to review until I finished them.
Miyano534 2004-05-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey! Good story! I like it as I like Ysabet & Becky T.'s Conan stories. You've developed ur own style and I don't feel bothered with the changing point-of-view, instead I found it's interesting. But still, at first I don't get the story (why Heiji could see ghost?), maybe you can explain a bit at the beginning so the reader won't get confused. Though, now I know that it's related with another story of yours, and I'm gonna read it all! Keep writing :)
Akuma-sama 2004-05-11 ch 7,	abuseExcellent series. Almost on par with some of Ysabet-sama's stuff. I like how you picture Heiji and Kazuha... great stuff. Damn you, now I really want to write a Conan fic... è_é!!
Kesenaibs 2004-05-01 ch 7, anon.	abuseI liked the letters at the end. Everybody was really in character, especially Heiji. I'm just starting to like that character more and more now. I love the debate that Heiji and Ai are having over the ghosts, and I really like the idea of family history in the "Talent". That was great. All in all, a well rounded fic that leaves readers waiting for more. I can't wait to see the next story, and I'm looking forward to finding out more of what you've got planned!
Lady_neria 2004-05-01 ch 7, anon.	abuseYou are most welcome. I can't wait until I see your next work ^^ P.s.nice ending
Jaelle 2004-05-01 ch 7,	abuseGREAT story! I just caught up with your series, and I really enjoyed it. My favourite so far is the second one, but this one was great too (and certainly more harrowing - poor Heiji, getting the sounds too now!). I'm really looking forward to a return of Kaitou Kid as well, but in the meantime, this one will keep me buzzing happily for a while! I thought you'd captured the relationship between Heiji and his Dad particularly well. They really do seem some sort of fundamental inability to understand each other, but at least he has his mother on-side (sometimes). I also enjoyed the way you write his relationship with Kazuha - it's sweet the way he admits it, but at the same time refuses to admit it. I look forward to the next story, whenever you have time to write it!
Mystic 2004-05-01 ch 7, anon.	abuseAfter a long day, this really helped my mood. ^_^ I couldn't help cracking up at this line: Doesn't seem to bother her that it's just a head, but she's a weird girl anyway
t0ky0-chan 2004-04-30 ch 7,	abusewowhee...that was good. i loved your story. ^^ you write good. it's a very intersting story, even when i first read about heiji's 'special' abilities to see ghosts, i kind of freaked out, but as the story developed, the ghosts, well played a nice role in the story. i really liked the story and will be waiting for you next fanfic. keep it up!!
Ke 2004-04-30 ch 7, anon.	abuseWow... it's cool how you started and ended it the same way ^^" It's been a really good fic and really interesting~ Now imma go read your older fics while waiting for the new one to come up.. ^_^

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