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Omniscient Squirrel
2007-07-27
ch 17,
abuseOh no, please update this story, I love it so much!! ;_;
Drachegirl14
2006-10-31
ch 17,
abuseKeep up the good work! More soon please!
NarakusGirlJ
2006-08-10
ch 1,
abuseHey there, I just started reading your fic today, and Im really interested. I like how its Auron POV, and not Rikku's it makes it good. I dont mind hers, but him, its differant. I see your following the story and stuff, which I also like. I cant wait to continue reading... if only there would be more time in the day !! :)
Yours truly,
NGJ
BlazingxSoul
2006-02-01
ch 17,
abuse*has a panic attack* I NEED AN UPDATE.
MC New York
2005-11-28
ch 17,
abuseAH! You're back! Hahaha, I know... I'm a day late and a dollar short, but you know what?! So what?! What does that matter?! You're back and you actually updated this story! **By the way, this is Madame Lulu...** Wow... I've been gone this long? Phew... I guess I was in a coma longer than I thought... Long story short, some people simply do not know how to drive cars properly. But enough about that! You updated! I thought you actually gave up on this one! But you didn't! And even though this story was short, I LOVED IT! Okay, now before I scare you with my excitement, I'm going to leave this comment at just this... I don't want to scare you with this. Oh, and btw, if you could, do you think you could review my story? Please? I'm trying to get some support here.. and I've had this story up for like... about a year now... I'm only on my second chapter, but I'm getting uninspired and I don't want to. So, if you could just please find sometime in your schedule to leave me a review on my story? It's called Switching Worlds. It's kinda stupid but please? I'd really appreciate it! Thank you!

Sincerely yours,
MC New York or Madame Lulu : ).
Sinn
2005-11-01
ch 17, anon.
abuseYou have Auron's POV down to the dot! Continue on to the next chapter!
The Last Princess of Hyrule
2005-10-16
ch 17,
abuseI finished the rest of this story and I'm so sad that we've all been left hanging like this! What's gonna happen? It's like, right at the climax. Please please please finish!

_The Last Princess of Hyrule
The Last Princess of Hyrule
2005-10-12
ch 9,
abuseI've read half of this story in one day, and I just want you to know that you have me totally enraptured! From the moment I started, I haven't been able to look away from the computer screen, forsaking even my dinner. I only stop now because it's midnight and I have school in the morning. But I think you should really continue this fic overall if/when you come back from hiatus. I love how well you've kept Auron in character. All of his reactions to Rikku thus far have been so dead on (and oh so adorable)! I can't wait to finish this story tomorrow. I just know it's going to be on my mind for a long, long time. And I never woulda guessed that you hadn't beaten FFX before starting this fic. ^_^ Please, please continue this someday!

_The Last Princess of Hyrule
Bratney
2005-08-22
ch 17,
abusewrite more plz!
Riny Beoulve
2005-08-05
ch 17,
abuseI love this fic! ^_^ You're such a good writer and I love tis Aurikku. I can't wait to read more!
Camron
2005-07-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really like it, it's very well thought out and molds itself into the game with adding context to things that had none in the game.

While I did start reading this hoping to find some decent Aurikku fluff, I am mildly suprised (and glad) to find that it also has some great description of the action from Auron's POV.

My only fear is that, currently in the last chapters it has began to fall into a sort of FFX:Aurons POV, more than a Auron/Rikku love story.

While I know it is currently at the action part of the story, (It's really a rush from the start of Home, to where their arrested). I hope you add some more time for the two of them.

So far you have kept with FFX's pace so I do not fear you going to far out of the journey.

Besides all that keep up the good work, you are really gifted and I can see your strong points are Dialogue and Plot Pace. Just don't get bogged down by the action scenes, and don't come to think of Auron/Rikku as a plot point instead of a theme, and I'm sure you and this story will continue to achieve the expectations I have come to expect.
Ruki The Sake Fairy
2005-07-15
ch 17,
abuseOMG OMG There totally needs to be more Aurikku Fluff!
Chibi-Sorrow
2005-07-13
ch 17,
abuseAwesome... I like this bunches!! It took forever to update though. But that's alright, it's a great chapter! Anyways, I just started reading this bout a month or so ago and thought it was a dead story. But it's not, so I'm happy! Keep writing!

Chibi-Sorrow
re-Jecht-ed
2005-07-13
ch 17,
abuseOh, man, thank you for updating. I freaking love this story, I reread the last two chapters and I think my heart pretty much melted all over my body from the awesomeness of it all. The "Where is Rikku" line in this chapter threw me off just a bit because I thought Rikku was also on deck, but, aside from my little brain-lapse or whatever, this is a really good chapter. Descriptive, suspenseful, and ...good! I love the way you write Auron. Hehe, glad to see you writing again~!! :D!
Keahi Mitsahima
2005-07-12
ch 17,
abuse(gasps) Holy snap! I totally forgot about zees story! Great work!
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