I think it was pretty well written, great job!! I just think that you wrote Zero exhaled too many times but ... whatever! It's still nice!! XD

I little minor mistake; at the beginning of Fragile Heart, you typed in "his" when you were reffering to Ciel by accident. ^^; Heh heh...Nice story so far!!

Hi Sosam can no longer review under the same , she had an FF acount now , but i'll always review...
please update soon i cant wait to see what 'll happened

i'm still looking forward for you to finish this FF i really love it , it would be sad if you never finish it , so please keep up.for all your fans out there

Sorry it took so long. Between classes and work, I haven't had much time to read. Anyways, I just got done reading Chapter 9 of your Rockman fanfic. I must say, it has been a while. However the story still moves and your writing skill stays sharp. I hope you continue with your writings and finish this work. Oh, and I've always liked the Leviathan pairing better, but I must say, your swaying me to the 'Ciel side'. Well, I better go. You can email me or whatever if you continue the story, or just want to comment on my comment.

Your faithful reader
Pierce

this is really cool please hurry and update

please update ! i can't wait more than this . it just your story too great , you can't just keep it like that .con you?
update son...

Come on, please update! I love your story and crave an update! Don't make me flame you! I will if you don't update!

Nice story. You should update. I'll be lookingforward to it.

this is a great story

Ooh, I can’t wait to see what kind of fight this is! Fefnir should give him a run for his money… (He can be a real pain on the game!) I liked this chapter, and the retrospect about Iris and Zero’s relationship. You portray emotion so well. Great job, and I can’t wait until the fight next chapter! *Wants to see things blow up!* Heheh… don’t mind me. I’m crazy.

-Ri

Aw, how cute. I guess I don’t mind the “fluffy stuff” when it’s like this. It’s nice to see someone who actually just put them together, instead of taking the entire fic to beat around the bush and make them emotionally constipated. And how appropriate… I just happened to be listening to the end them of MMZ 3 when I was reading the end of that. Don’t know… it just seemed to fit. By the way, it’s your fic, slightly AU, so I guess you can give him whatever reasons you want, but Phantom, being a ninja, self-destructed also as a manner of ninja tradition, I believe; kinda like the old Samurai. Also, I sure hope that he was only bluffing when he said he’d kill Ciel; I don’t think Neo-Arcadia would kill humans; only reploids. Anyway, good writing, although you tend to miss commas. I like this, and the only reason I’m not big on Zero/Ciel couplings is because she’s only fourteen in the first game! Yeesh, a little young, I think. As for Leviathan… I really see her with Fefnir, myself. (Obviously, I don’t consider the Guardians to be siblings XD)

-Ri

Nice chapter, but wow, Zero’s a little… or a lot shallow. He only met Leviathan once for crying out loud! Why is it the male characters can always be so easily swayed, and the females are the once who never get confused about who they’re flirting with?! For someone who is over a hundred, Zero is certainly immature… I mean, there’s nothing wrong with him liking Leviathan, but after talking to her briefly once? Is EVERYTHING based on appearance? Okay, done ranting at Zero’s stupidity… A nice chapter, although Phantom seems a bit more… hm… playful doesn’t seem to be the word, but the grin just threw me off. He always struck me, along with Harpuia, as being extremely serious about his work. I think it would take a lot more than that to make either of them smile, but that’s just me. But hey, at least you kept him in character as far as not killing a human goes; a lot of people seem to forget that Copy X and the Guardians don’t want to harm humans, only reploids. You’re doing a good job of keeping things in perspective, which is breath of fresh air after all the overdone “they’re evil and they want to kill everyone” take on it I keep seeing.

-Ri

so u actually DIDN abandon the fic! nd as 4 reference 2 your last note on the last chapter nop. i think sero/ciel is much betta. its my fave megaman (if u can call megaman zero that) series ppairing.

I love the Guardians… heh, as usual, Leviathan’s portrayed as a flirt… but that’s all right. I favor Zero/Leviathan over Zero/Ciel… but I know this is a Zero/Ciel fic, anyway. (Besides, I favor Fefnir/Leviathan the most!) Good chapter, anyway. I like the interaction with the Guardians. I can’t wait to see what else you have in store. (I know, I know, I haven’t even finished reading what’s there yet XD) Anyway, Keep up the great work.

-Ri