Very beautiful. You should do more NarSan c:

This was awesome to read. ] It was a great job! Keep up the great work! D

Very good! I applaud you on making such a story. I usually read illogical Sango/Naraku pairings but this...this is genius. Thanks for writing it!

Oi! This was good.

keep this up.

DAMN! This is creapy as hell! In a good way! I wish I could write really deep, creepy, scary stories like this!

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O.o

That is creepy. But really good. I spotted a few typos, but nothing to 'detract from the reading experience', so to say. :)

Wow...THAT WAS SO GOOD! I loved that story! You made Naraku fit into a role that most people would never be able to do, and pulled it off! Sango Is my favorite charater, and I like any coupling including her. But there definatly are not very many good Sango/Naraku fics, so I congradulate you, good work. (And most it be a one-shot?)

This is cool! There could be a very interesting story written around this small part of Naraku's thoughts. Good job!

Wow. That was beautiful. Sadistic, but still beautiful. I would've never thought that was the reason Naraku likes to torment people, but it makes a lot of sense. This was a good peice. Keep writing!

This is a really great story! My evil pink flying monkeys, Bob (the thing that lives under my bed), and I applaud you and your deep thoughts. I seriously never thought of Naraku thinking this way...to cast aside Kikyou? What a concept...I'm off to read more of your fanfics. The only problem is that throughout this whole ficcy it had a deep, thoughtful sort of mood until you put the analogy of the mouse and cheese...that was well, weird. Thanks anyway for inspiring this completely AWESOME ficcy!

Damn you are only 15 and write this good? I love dark love fanfic like this and this is just awesome story. I can see how this could be canon or it's better then canon.

This is a one shot. I have disliked one shots, and have refused to write a reveiw for them. But this, this is a prefect one shot. Naruaku and Onigumo, both in love with two differnt girls, but they themselves are one preson. I could actually see this happening as the series contiunes. Please conitune writing one-shots, as this story, althogh I wish it hadn't, has unspired me. I hope the rest of you like this one-shot as I have. Thank you,

Kiva Hiare

H'm. I think... 'darkly brilliant' would just about sum this up. You've got an almost scarily proficient grasp on Naraku's mannerisms, thoughts, and musings, giving them a subtlety that is rarely seen amidst the fandom. And while it could just be Morbidity's fault for sparking my curiosity as to the strange possibility of these two in any sort of link... the way you write this... it *could* happen. It won't. But it could.

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Keep up the excellent work, and Starry Nights,

Sabriel.

That was wonderful! Very good idea. _ I really think you should continue it. Why don't you? I know of some people who would want you to.

I positively love this story. You totally got me addicted to Naraku/Sango. I especially love that you bring up how Naraku would totally use her natural urges to just give in to pain and darkness because of her horrible past. And how he would embrace her feelings in a way that the Inu-group does not. Sango is a character that seems like she is always having a little battle of good vs. evil going on inside her and it's really interesting to think of how Naraku would use that to his advantage.

All in all, I am completely in love with this story and am severly tempted to write my own Naraku/Sango. This is one of my favorite fanfics _

-Morbidity