You've gotta finish this it seems good :)

nice so far

such determination 4 her resurrection lol

Please update! I want to know what happens!

Freaky!

That wos wicked, but ido think the chptrs. 1-3 could b a bit longer.And where did Vincent come from? .
I liked the way u referred 2 bits in da game, it made it better. (Like the Earth Harp & Desert Rose.) Pleaz continue cos i wanna kno wot happens next. It was col!

Cool story, but make your chapters longer! Ch. 3 was like a quarter of a page /

hey, this is good...please finish it!

thats good! keep writing! i can't wait to find out what happeneds in the end!

That was a nice chapter. Aeris will finally be revive. I can't wait. Write more and I'll be waiting

Hey...it's cool. i hope you write more. keep on writing :)

wow.. that was.. er... choppy, but the thought was good ; work more on adding detail and don't rush the dialouge so much, it partically takes away from the story, but other wise it was good

Cleris please! BTW, the chapters are too short; you should combine this into one whole thing.

extremely short chapter and even though an aeris revival fic seems cliche-pretty good job...keep writing

Great start, mate!

What the hell? That was wayyyyy too short!