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Reviews for: Living Next Door
shinigamifan
2004-09-24 . chapter 1
aw thats so sweet i really really like this fic it's good and it was a very good idea.i've read some of your other fics and this one is just as good as the rest.this one along with new hope home have gotta be in my top ten of fics.is your ego getting any bigger yet(lol)
neway i better go cause i gotta finish some work for class which starts in about 50 minutes.
ja ne
*jumps up and down on chair waving like a madman*
Nikkler
2004-06-19 . chapter 1
That was a great story I loved it!
huggles
nikkler
A Thousand Paper Cranes
2004-05-02 . chapter 1
Aw. It was cute. I liked, I did. ^.^
Blue-Pig
2004-04-08 . chapter 1
Really good! This is going into my favourites!!
kuroi gami
2004-04-03 . chapter 1
hehehehehe
i loved it! that was so great!
Keiran
2004-04-02 . chapter 1
Keiran: NO! Not Relena!!
Duo: Relax, Kei-chan. No Relena for you. See? *points the button* You reviewed. *pats hyperventilating Keiran*
Heero: Hn! *snags Duo's hand away and puts it on his own head*
Duo: Yeah, you've been good too, Hee-chan. *walks forward and pats Dragongirl* You too.
Heero: *grunts* Go out with Wufei, will you? *handcuffs Duo to himself*

Keiran: Get a room. Anyway. Yep, Dragon-chan, that was cute. ^_^ Loved Duo being a kindergarten teacher. It fits him. Only one tiny 'but' - didn't they have sex on the first date? It was sort of vague, fortunately, but if you said it even a little bit more clearly, the effect of the fic would be spoiled. So yeah, it was close to being, not perhaps a disaster, but a cliche PWP (**-without-**). I hope you are not offended. The wording however, made it just fine.
Hugs.
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