 Keiran 2004-04-02 . chapter 1Keiran: NO! Not Relena!!
Duo: Relax, Kei-chan. No Relena for you. See? *points the button* You reviewed. *pats hyperventilating Keiran*
Heero: Hn! *snags Duo's hand away and puts it on his own head*
Duo: Yeah, you've been good too, Hee-chan. *walks forward and pats Dragongirl* You too.
Heero: *grunts* Go out with Wufei, will you? *handcuffs Duo to himself*
Keiran: Get a room. Anyway. Yep, Dragon-chan, that was cute. ^_^ Loved Duo being a kindergarten teacher. It fits him. Only one tiny 'but' - didn't they have sex on the first date? It was sort of vague, fortunately, but if you said it even a little bit more clearly, the effect of the fic would be spoiled. So yeah, it was close to being, not perhaps a disaster, but a cliche PWP (**-without-**). I hope you are not offended. The wording however, made it just fine.
Hugs. |