Awesome beastmaster wait till u update u do soon.

Hi this story was really good and interesting, plus i really liked it. keep up the good work. i can't wait what happens next. bye until next time please update thank you.

ps: please don't give up on this story thank you.

this is just the right length for an opening, not too long but not too short. good work. the idea of tao having a sister is new. i think you're the only one to come up with it, so good work on the originality. can't wait until the three meet up! UPDATE SOON!

really good i like being tao's sis

Nice opening. Just the right length for building
interest. I look forward to the next part.