The shop keeper and Kakashi laughing so hard they were crying? Yup, me too. I also particularly liked the : “over-excessive angst” of Sasuke. Dead on. LOL!

Good job! Great story!!

this was very cute... :D ...

I'm sorry but I just have to type this!

when you wrote "...career, when he had felt like pinning the poor boy against the wall..." my mind went blank and I was like o_O 'ohh a PERVERT!'

seriously that line and some others sounded so wrong, not that I'm saying its bad or anything! it just sounds perverted, heh...anyway that's all!

great job on this by the way!

poor iruka stuck explaining life lessons to naruto with kakashi as a sidekick! very cute

lol, so funny ^_^

Very cute :)

this was HILARIOUS! my favorite part was when he thinks it could be about something close to Shino's bugs. It made me think of Shino and Neji standing in front of a class of young kids trying to explain it. Soo funny. they also stay in character. Hilarous. Wonderful. AWESOME!

Cute story, and I think Kakashi was a good addition. Nice job and cute story.

That was cute!! It was really funny!!

Lol! Yes, that was amazing, Kakashi is truely the coolest, ever! Great job on the story!

WOW!! This had me laughing as hard as Kakashi at some points. This was EXTREAMLY cute and I wish it was more than just a one shot. This is going to my favorite stories list for shure. Keep up the good work.

AWE that was just so FREAKING CUTE! OMG...I LOVED It:D really really LOVED it:D

THANKS:D

OMG this was hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing. Keep up the good work.

L8R!

AW! KAWAAI! Such a cute story, Naruto being so naive! *snickes* Birds and Bees no Jutsu... Good one!