I apologize for any earlier madness I felt toward you and the Athrun + Lacus storywriter I yealled at earlier. I had the title of this song used for my InuYasha fanfic, so I never noticed GUndam SEEDs titles. I am soorry. Sumimasen... >_

And because it's pretty. ^_^ And true.

Continue writing Asukira stories k?We need more around.

Awesome, well written, and rather poetic one-shot. Heheh. Yes, AsuKira is one of my favourite pairings, and it makes me happy to read a fic on them, as there seems to be few. :( I really like how you portrayed it though - the innocent love, and the loss of innocence, and how a mere word can have many meanings (I like that the most actually - as I thought that Kira and Asuran didn't get enough development on their relationship after Asuran sort of switched sides). And I like the hope you give at the end, that their relationship can evolve. My only criticism would have to be that it's too short. ^_^

Wow! I just love that song! And I'm a BIGGEST fan of AsuKira! ^_^ Good work!

beautiful language you write in, I must say. Well, of course it was easy to see who was doing the monologue. But, it's even more fun if you don't state the obvious, I know. Anyway, hope you'll write more...just something not yaoi. I have nothing against that, really. I just want to see how you'll do with non-yaoi. Ja!

omg... omg.. omg.. i want to... cried a lot.. ;__;... annani ishho datta no ni.. asukira.. omg.. *sniff* let me cry.. i love this... MAKE MORE! XD