This is a lovely little story. I hope Guy has kept writing.

ha that was awesome! tell him he's a good writer!

That was a very nice story :) I hope you'll continue to write for us, and for yourself, Guy!

"Imagination is the highest kite one can fly." (Lauren Bacall)

Only the sky is the limit!

Good job, Guy. Keep up the good work.

my favorite part is where Gandalf says "Ew!" That is so cute! I love reading little kid's stories. I'm very happy for Guy, he did a good job!
~Kai =^_^=

Yay! Go Guy! Awesome story: I loved the part where Aragorn said "Ew"! Very funny. Keep writing: you've got talent! ^_^

cute...

Guy, you understand your characters well. I especially like Aragorn's comment at the end and the repeat of Then they carried on. It does sum up what the Fellowship was about...not giving up.
A suggestion, next time go back and underline the first word in every sentence. If the same word shows up again and again, think of new words to start your sentences with.
You be sure to carry on.

I'm from a family who tends to write, a lot. We've all started young, and my nine-year-old brother *loves* to write stories. He writes them all the time!
This is /great/, Guy! Don't let anyone ever tell you that you can't do something you want to do. Stick at it, do the very best you can, and someday I'm going to be looking at a bestseller, telling my friends, "Hey, I almost knew this guy! I read one of his first stories!"
Before you know it, you'll be writing stuff with chapters!
My favorite part was when Legolas shot ten orcs! That was rockin', dude!
God bless, and keep it up!
RRP
AIM: RivenRebelPoet
PS: Hilary, I'd like to talk with you sometime, if that's alright. I think it's awesome that you've posted his story, and I hope people have enough sense to review. It's so cool to see the "little people" out there doing stuff, and Guy is certainly trying hard. My email is RivenRebelPoet@hotmail.com if you don't mind contacting me; thanks a ton!

Great job! Especially for a nine-year old! I think Lord of the Rings are the best books ever and the movies really express them in detail. I'm glad you chose to write about it!

Orcs, ew, hehehe, cute.