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| Gender Outlaw 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. |
| Tutsuya 2008-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abusei LOVE the colour orange it is totaly awsome and i love this story |
| Pink Illusion 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseNice story amonst the crowds of other orange-related one shots. Enjoyable. |
| yllom21 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story and nicely written. Naruto's pov was good. |
| Gohanzgirl 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is very cute and it makes sense!! lol great job! |
| Kichi Hisaki 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was... Um... RANDOM... Yeah... ... Let's all Have a Happy Birthday, now! Who-e--! |
| Coco Cow 2004-09-20 ch 1, | abuseWow...all I can say, really. Naruto seemed both in character AND inteligent... *BOWS THE DUCK DOWN* Terrific work! -Coco Cow ^_^ |
| Spectrum 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseAnother winner. Great job on Naruto's POV; you've got his voice down very well. And yeah, Naruto is definitely one for orange. Even though I'm not above complaining about his choice of wardrobe every now and then, I'll readily admit that every last bit of it fits him perfectly. "I want to stand out." Again... wonderful job writing him. ^_^ |
| Celestra 2004-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this fic - it gave a lot of perspective to Naruto and displays his personality well. Hahah, I'm a stickler for orange myself - blue, green, turquoise, purple, and orange - my flag colors :D *grins* |
| Purim 2004-04-05 ch 1, | abuseInteresting fic... puts a whole new perspective to his style, really. It's a good fic=) |
| fireblazie 2004-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI liked it!! ^_^ It shows us the.. deeper side of Naruto... |
| Miss NeKoChan 2004-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED IT! i thought it was so cutie! nice story ^_^ |
| Zaln 2004-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was actually very nice. It was well thought-out, and really fit with Naruto's personality. I enjoyed it, gonna check out your other fics (if you got any). peace, -Z |