whoever that was was right, it doesn't need an R rating.
It's good, and makes sense, which is a plus. I guessed quite quickly who the affair was with, but I don't spose I would have if I didn't know you. You're getting predictable, mmoa...
very good though, and I admit fully to being a hypocrite.

OMG. this is ** good. doesn't quite need an R rating yet, tho. you'd get more readers with a pg13. AMAZING. you must write more of this. must must must.
i'm too lazy to log in.
mm42

That was very good! I felt quite sympathetic towards Narcissa but the ending showed her strength of character. Very nicely done.
^_~
DreamWeaver