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| Lloyd Neruameshi 2008-06-20 ch 13,  | abuseso what are the pairing votes so far? |
| exile014 2008-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abusego to to read manga |
| MULAN-IFUWEREGAY 2008-03-18 ch 10, | abuseUPDATE SOON |
| loliop 2008-02-24 ch 9, anon. | abuseits kai, not kin, kin is that sound girl from the sound 3 |
| Wraithhawk 2007-11-11 ch 2, anon. | abusedoes anyone even read this? coz u really lack skill in writing and knowledge of the anime so give up this story has a good plot but ur bad writing wrecks it and no-one yells out a jutsu as loud as they can because the enemy can counter it if they know hat it is |
| frytrix 2007-10-03 ch 3, anon. | abusewhat happened with the first chapter,, i think the story was good cause i read the first chapter, but after it was no folling up on first chapter the wole story lost the life you writed in to it... i m finding myself another story..tell me if u write it better(^_^) |
| Nuramon 2007-05-02 ch 13, | abuseGreat story like the idea of Ryo Wonder what you have planned on teaching naruto and wat abilities Ryo/naruto has/develops pls update again |
| 00asianwriter00 2007-02-01 ch 13, | abuseplease put naruto/hinata together! make the chapters longer like 15 pages or more page long chapters. ^^ |
| 00asianwriter00 2007-01-31 ch 8, | abusecan it be naruto/hinata? please let it be. |
| Elf-King-Colius 2007-01-23 ch 10, | abuseget to naruto's training already man. you are waisting time with all of this mumbo jumbo about this guy wanting to kill orochimaru. i like the story but it is going a little slow. as a fellow writer i feel that you are spending to much time on one thing and need to get moveing on the story. this is not a flame just to let you know. the story idea is good and you make a good story but it is staying on the same thing too much. thank you for listioning to my rants. yours, Elf-King-Colius |
| hinata-naruto-neji-HNN 2006-12-01 ch 13, | abuseI realy like this story, i dont think iv ever seen this twist taken so yea nice...up date when you can kk |
| jbalman 2006-11-19 ch 13, | abuselike it |
| brolly1990 2006-10-31 ch 13, | abusewow really great story...i look forward to updates...bye |
| demonicmist 2006-10-01 ch 13, | abusegreat chap. loved the flashbacks update more. |
| ShadowBack 2006-09-19 ch 13, | abuseGood chapter ! I like this flashback. Thank you ! |