Just finished 2 paragraphs so far, but I had to say that I LOVE the term "Punk-icide"!

what no more, come one you so should keep going, i want to know what happens next.

I liked it.If it only happened that way in the real episode it would have been great.

aw! so cute!

punk-icide is a very funny word. I love the story.

I wrote a "Nag Hammadi" one too, but I have to admit- I think yours is like five times better! I love the LL action! Can't wait to read more of your stories!

Aww, that was cute! I like!

Hmm, I've just discovered your writing, and now I plan to read all of your fics and flood your inbox with happy reviews because you rock. Thanks for writing!

Thanks for the little bit of sweet fluff. I enjoyed it a great deal. Pamie's recap of Nad Hammadi was good wasn't it. I thought the way she described why they didn't kiss was really well done, but of course who needs them to actually kiss on the show when we've got you. Aren't we lucky!! Thanks again.

Sweet ending! I like that you dealt with the difficulties of their previous involvements without getting bogged down in it. Lorelai's thoughts through the whole thing were fun, too, from Punk-icide to "Where did he learn to kiss like that?" Good times!

Wonderful, lovely, outstanding! Thanks so much for posting, what a great talent you are!

A cute, sweet take on this scene. Lorelai's mental babbling as everything happens is spot on.

Really, really nice. I love Pamie's recaps, too. I like this fic a lot, it needed to be written- but like Pamie said, I am glad it didn't really happen on the show.

What I loved about this story: The idea of a "Lorelai Festival", the Kerouac wannabe, Punk-icide, Kill Jess, Vol. 1, You have blue eyes, The ENTIRE kissing scene, and the decision to move forward. You have a definite talent. Excellent job!

O! Much better than the whack I took at finishing this scene. Loved it. Loved it. I'm so glad you are contributing this. Thanks.